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I am very glad to hear that I captured the voice so well.

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I thought that it captured quite well the struggle that most ex-sevices feel when they leave the forces. I'm ex-military msyelf, I did ten years and that was a long time ago.The mentality of service people, necessarily, is different to that of civilians and it was an adjustment. The clarity of the chain of command etc - the absence of that is jarring and I thought you spoke well to it.

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