I'm returning to working on the sequel to my first fan fic "The Fall Of The Apple Family" Now I have a question for you guys.

Would you rather that I post pages before they are edited? If so then there's a chance I'll screw up the gramar again. (Which will annoy the nickpicking types.) And you'll have to wait for the story to be edited for a few days.

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I've noticed a few comments complaining on how my grammar isn't really up to scratch. Well good news is that bubby963 has kindly agreed to help edit my stories as I write them for you.

My first observation of bubby's work really stood out to me and made me feel like I was reading my own story for the first time.

So remember guys "bubby963"

Now you wont have to put up with my crappy grammar anymore.

Just coming up with the last few chapters to rocket to insanity, I'm glad to say that within the next 15 hours I'll probably be able to upload a few chapters and an ending to this story. I'm really glad with all the possotive feedback I've been getting as well as possotive critiques.

I was never much of a grammar and english master but I still try my hardest to make a story as interesting as possible without making too many mistakes.

(POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT!!)

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I really didn't know what to expect when I was about to post this fan fic. I thought that people might read it and think it wasn't good. But I'm really happy with all the posotive feedback I'm getting from you guys.

I dont mind critiques if you guys have any. It just helps me see what I can improve on in future fan fics. (Yes I'm going to be writing more)

Thanks, and yes I will be adding more chapters soon but not for the rest of tonight.

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