Chapters 1 thru 11 have been updated. Basically the chapters have been edited for typographical, grammatical and formatting errors, and minor revised for descriptions, speech, etc.

Working on Chapter 12 now.

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Does anyone want to see more of "Double Trouble"?

I've spent several days going over Chapter Six. It just doesn't feel "right". Just having a dickens of a time with it, and I'm not sure why it's giving me such a hard time.

Equestria Daily got back to me about my story submission. Quote (partial):

Thank you for submitting your story to Equestria Daily, but, unfortunately, I cannot recommend posting it.

Would be nice if they would explain why, unless POS isn't a category they normally provide.

Owell.

Well, here I go. Twenty-four hours after posting my very first ever MLP fanfic. It's not my first ever story, but my first go at writing a fanfic for MLP:FIM.

Alas, it seems I've already been thumbed-down once. Ah well, it happens. I'd just like to know why. It's hard to learn from mistakes without getting feedback.

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