Ok, first of all, I'm am COMPLETELY new at writing here ,everyone. You are all being extremely hurtful in the comments. I'm only 13 and none of you are even saying anything good about the story. I'm really upset that my first story on here is getting all these bad comments and I'm trying here. So, I hope you're all happy to know I'm deleting it and that you're making me do this. I'm sorry if I sound mean here ,but I'm just saying that I'm really upset about this.