LotE 4/13 Update · 2:39am Apr 14th, 2012
Alright, so Chromosome stopped by and pointed out some really crucial stuff. Uber thanks, Chromosome! So he brought to my attention the pacing of the first chapter, which was way faster than the other chapters. This was because I had started writing the story with a modest goal of 8k to 10k words. But as inspiration took me, it got much longer than that. Right now it's sitting at about 26k with the incomplete third and fourth chapters included. I figure it will top out at around 32k to 35k.