Always love to see some criticism by people. More you have the more I can improve. IDK I guess I am feeling a bit dishearten by my stories.

I have decided to get rid of that belly button story and have moved it to my paste bin, well it was already there but still its there now. I figure that I want to keep my personal best stories on here, and keep some of weirder shit I write onto there and on /mlp/. Normally I hate having to delete my stuff, but the critiques I got were enough for me to realize, "Hey maybe I need to improve some more".

My paste bin BTW:

http://pastebin.com/u/Rubber-Zeke