Any criticism? · 2:07am Aug 6th, 2014
Always love to see some criticism by people. More you have the more I can improve. IDK I guess I am feeling a bit dishearten by my stories.
Writefag from /mlp/ who likes fat ponies and Gilda http://pastebin.com/u/Rubber-Zeke
Always love to see some criticism by people. More you have the more I can improve. IDK I guess I am feeling a bit dishearten by my stories.
As much as I don't... share your taste in writing, I hate to see writers not like their own work. Perhaps you could submit a story to a review group.
As far I can tell, everything appears well done in my opinion.