Help on my story called Vacation In Kenya. · 6:51am Feb 24th, 2015
HELP! I need someone to help me with my story, Vacation In Kenya. I'm trying to submit it, but it won't submit. Here are the following reasons. It says half of my writing is copied from Wikipedia, well, that's something they're right about. My narration is fine, but they said it's a mess of dialogue. Just in case if they're right, I need help.