So you guys know about the Bonus Chapter Series right? Well it seems the chapters I've posted there so far is probably more important to the main plot than I had originally thought, and SLthethird suggested I should move these chapters over to the main story so that events that portrayed outside of Cyan and Lumina's side of the story actually play a part to the plot. I see some good things and

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I think I rewrote the story enough to post the first couple of chapters I'll be changing in terms of plot and development. I'll be deleting chapters 17 and up, and I'll repost the first two or three rewritten chapters with a new plot line. I hope you'll like the changes, and I'll post a new chapter each day before I get caught up with the chapters I've rewritten.

SLThethird has pointed out how much the pacing is getting too quick, unfortunately I have to agree now that I take a good look at it. I may have to go back to chapter 19 or 18 to rewrite everything I had from that point beyond. Does that mean there will be less clop material?... Unfortunately that could be a yes. I'm not sure how many of you are here for the clop, but I'm thinking it will be for the best if I delete everything after 18 or 19, and plan how I can pace the story better. Maybe

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I'm pretty caught up with what I've written and saved in Cyan and Lumina's story, so it's gonna take me some time to write new chapters, and edit them as such. I already have a couple chapters saved on the Bonus Chapter series, but I'm taking my sweet time publishing those because I don't want to reveal any spoilers for the main plot. Which is why I'm publishing chapters at a faster pace with the latter than the former. Anyway, it might take me a few days to write and edit what I'll have before

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So I cut out the overview in the author's notes in all the chapters like how an animated series recaps a previous episode on TV. I've only left notes on the chapters I made the biggest changes in, those warning about clop material ahead, and soon sometime in a later chapter or two, gore and adult-like violence material. I PMed one of the staff about the 'rating swipe' someone mentioned, and unfortunately, that's not possible, and of course taking the story down and republishing it is not

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I'm honestly at a standstill right now. I mean I have the next couple of chapters drafted that still need to be edited for grammar's sake, but judging by how one of the people that read and generously took the time and effort to write a summary of each chapter, so far up to chapter 3, I didn't realize how much of a big pile of crap my story was in the beginning until now. At this point, I can probably see why I've been getting so many dislikes, even with each new chapter I post every other day.

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More specifically, stories that are happening outside of Cyan and Lumina's journey. I like to consider these as 'Bonus Chapters,' because these are either relevant to the main plot, or they're just there for the sake of fun as we explore the lives of ponies Cyan and Lumina had came in contact with. The chapters mainly focus on Cyan and Lumina's friends, as the title of the series will imply. The first couple of chapters I'll be writing and posting will be what happened to Roxxie and Teala after

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I cried a little while writing this chapter, so I hope what I put here is well worth the read.

I've been writing for quite a bit the past couple of days, and I've saved a couple chapters on the site ready to be published at my say. I need to give my hand a break as it's starting to cramp, I need to focus on school the next few weeks, and I think I'm at a good point to start writing up the first few chapters of what I would like to call "Bonus Stories," where the chapters focus more on the characters Cyan and Lumina have met that may or may not be important to the canon of the

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I feel like something like this would have more of an anime type of opening. I found one, but it seems too cheery considering what direction l will get them to later. Then again, the animation with this just seems to fit with Cyan and Lumina's characters, and others they meet along the way. I don't know.

What do you think? Do you have any suggestions to what song could fit with this story?