All chapters have been rewritten, mostly chapter 1 and 2 with bits of 3. Reading a second time is not required but i would recommend it due to the subtle changes made through out.
Navy Vet working IT, I usually write about whatever inspires me.
After a long absence from writing I am pleased to announce that the final chapter of For Want of a Better World is underway in full swing. If this is the final or if I'm going to have a epilogue remains to be seen. One cause for my delay was that I love the characters too much to see the story come to an end. I was tossing around the idea of a series called The Jeff and Fang Adventures where they just run around with the gang and cause trouble but I think it's best to just let them go.
to everyone actively anticipating the next chapter of "For Want of a Better World" i have news:
I was busy with Skyrim and a crap load of PS3 games for about a week, and I jst got a 55" TV for wich to play them on, hence the delay.
IT IS FINISHED!!!! the next chapter is done as of 10 minutes prior to me writing this, but Jagun has yet to edit it so send him hate mail, he does not get enough.
I had finished the chapter but I don't like it, so I am rewriting it in first person to better portray the thoughts and emotions of whoever the star of the chapter is, so this calls for a re-write and a longer delay, luckily the plot points and most of the dialog will remain unchanged so expect the next chapter by monday at the latest. so sorry for the delay but I don't want this fic to be a flop.
Hello, as you are all aware my Lich King teaser was a huge hit, not even 24 hours after I load it up to the site it has a 4.8/5 rating and people are begging for more, and I don't intend to disappoint. As the title suggests, I am looking for a pre-reader to criticize and analyze my chapters as I work on them. If anyone is interested feel free to message me through fimfiction.net or e-mail me at tielkej@yahoo.com