I beseech thee! Lend us thy opinions! · 10:14am Mar 27th, 2012
So for anyone who has read My Ponyville, I'd like your opinions on some feedback I got from the EqD pre-readers.
First of all they said there were a lot of comma splices (this is something I can never do right regardless of what I try apparently) so a thorough editting would be required. Anyway, they also said there were two major plotholes, namely "Where was Celestia?" and "Antagonist has weird Motivation"