I believe that my story, especially the beginning part, is in an unacceptably low quality.

At first I couldn't see what was wrong with it, now after much time has passed, I have reread my beginning chapters and find them wanting and incredibly boring, especially the character Octavo. I feel like there are glaring problems with the story that I must fix.
I have deviated from the initial theme of my story to something that it was never meant to be, to it's detriment

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