From whence didst the grand idea come for Luna to speak in the manner of days past? 'Tis vexing at best, and a pox on my mind when not.
Old English is horrible to write - a mangled approximation is probably the best I'm going to manage without spending months in study.
Half of chapter 4 is done, of which half will require major edits for flow - at the moment, dialogue reads about as well as a preschoolers conversation.