Chapter 1
Red and Yellow
Falling, I'm falling. Twilight thought as she found herself dropping from hundreds of feet above the ground. Either the second floor of the library was hundreds of feet above the ground 5 years in the future, or the "space" part if the Time Gate had been changed. As she quickly plummeted towards the ground, she had a few seconds to determine what had happened, then she hit her head on a tree branch and passed out.
• • •
"Are you okay? Wake up!" A voice said, something shaking her. Twilight guessed that somepony had found her unconscious on the ground and tried to wake her up. She slowly opened her eyes to see not a pony, but some yellow mouse thing with long, black-tipped ears and bright red cheeks.
"Oh good, you're awake!" The creature exclaimed. Twilight pushed herself up into a sitting position, examining the surrounding. She was in a lush forest, mosses and grasses covering the ground and every type of tree she could think of surrounded her.
"This isn't Ponyville, did the Everfree forest overgrow the town?" She asked to herself.
"Ponyville, Everfree? I've never heard of those places, this is Oran Forest." The mouse said. Twilight examined it to be about half her size.
"What exactly are you?" She asked the yellow creature bluntly.
"Oh, sorry. I'm Pikachu! My friend and I live over in Treasure Town not far from here!"
Twilight had never heard of Pikachu, or Treasure Town, or Oran Forest before. Cautiously, she stood on all four legs. "Well where in Equestria are we? I probably need to speak to Princess Celestia about whatever's happened."
"Equestria? Princess Celestia? What are you talking about? This is the world of Pokemon!" "Pikachu" replied.
"What?! Oh no! My spell took me to another dimension! What to do?!" Twilight paced around in a fit.
"What kind of move did you use? I've never heard of an Espeon using something that can transport you to other dimensions, Palkia maybe..." Pikachu mumbled. Startled, Twilight ran towards the nearest pond and looked in. What she saw wasn't a pony, but a creature with her fur color and cutie mark surrounding a gem on her forehead.
"Now what have you found Pikachu? Oh..." A different voice said behind her. Twilight turned around to see an orange and yellow fox-like creature walk up to Pikachu.
"And who are you?" Twilight asked the fox.
"I'm Fennekin. I believe you already met Pikachu." She replied. Twilight nodded.
"And who might you be? We told you our names, so we'd like to know yours." Pikachu asked.
"I'm Twilight Sparkle." She answered. Both Pikachu and Fennekin began to laugh at her unusual name.
"Okay Espeon, we get it. Stop kidding around." Fennekin laughed.
"I'm serious. I'm Twilight Sparkle, student of Princess Celestia, bearer of the Element of Magic." At this the two stopped laughing. No one who could describe themselves like that and so confidently could be lying.
"Well, this is awkward..." Pikachu said. "I guess we should get you a place to stay. We're going to join Wigglytuff's Guild tomorrow, the best exploration teams have graduated from there. Would you like to join us? You don't have anywhere else to go."
"Well, I guess so. I don't know anything about this place though so pardon any stupid questions about any basic Pokemon knowledge." Twilight huffed.
"Don't worry, we'll help explain as we go along," Fennekin replied. The trio walked out of the forest and towards the small town close by.
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"This is Treasure Town, all the necessities an Exploration Team could need are here. Over there's Kecleon Market, and that's Duskull Bank, and over there is Kangaskan Storage," Pikachu said, pointing out various buildings throughout the town. Twilight studied each one carefully so that she knew where to go later on. "And this is where we live," Pikachu said, gesturing to a small tent on the edge of town.
"We won't need this tent tomorrow, Wigglytuff gives you a room to stay in while at the guild. We can pack this up and store it for later," Fennekin said happily. Pikachu led the way inside the tent, and in it were two piles of straw and a crate full of apples and berries Twilight had never seen before.
"We'll just split part of our straw for you," Pikachu said, pulling off a chunk of his bed. "We shouldn't need it tomorrow." Fennekin pulled off an equally sized chunk of her bed and they together made a suitable sized bed for Twilight. Pikachu grabbed an sple out of the crate, and handed it to Twilight. "Let's eat, then we'll get a goods night sleep. We'll need it tomorrow."
The three Pokémon finished their apples quickly, then settled into the straw. "Goodnight Fennekin, Goodnight Twilight." Pikachu said sleepily.
"Goodnight Pikachu, Goodnight Twilight." Fennekin replied, equally tired.
"Goodnight Pikachu, Goodnight Fennekin," Twilight said to the two. "Goodnight Spike," she whispered into the night, no one awake to hear her.
My only real complaint at this point is that the chapters are a bit short for my liking. Otherwise, this is a good start, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Remind me the species of Fenneken if you don't mind.
One suggestion though. Your next chapters... try combining some of them for a bigger word count.
Thank you, my chapters may not be the longest, but I am trying my best to increase the size. I'm glad that my story has gotten this much good review in such a short time.
celestia should send the rest of them to go get her and form different teams
fluttershy rainbowdash
rarity applejack
and twilight will join the fannekin pikachu and spike will join them as an axew or something
Interesting, I thought you're going to do a alternet version of Gates of Infinity, then again it's much more easier to do a sequel to Explorers of Time, Darkness and Sky versions
2258112 fennekin is the fire starter for pokemon X&Y
Very good story so far. Lengthen your chapters and I will be satisfied.As for your Exploration team request from last chapter...
Team Aura Storm
Team Members:2
Team Rank: Master
Lucario:
Gander:Male
Nickname: Anubis
Ability: Steadfast
Moves:Aura Sphere
Dragon Pulse
Extreme Speed
Metal Claw
Blaziken:
Gender:Male
Nickname:Fawkes
Ability:Blaze
Moves:Blast Burn
Brick Break
Flamethrower
Aerial Ace
Omg you stole my idea only it wasn't going to be like this--it was going to human becoming a pony thing instead but I do love your story! Hoping for more.
Nice one! Keep her a going!
...Please don't call me useless like all authors do. I don't want another argument.
2258112 Fennekin is the Gen 6 fire starter.
2261295 i like your idea but couldnt you have blaziken have flamethower instead of slash and aerial ace instead of peck?
this is an awesome idea man cant wait for more also a fan of the mystery dungeon series and pokemon so keep up the good work man
2263231 Sure I guess that could work. I will edit my comment.
Team Request? HURRAY!
->Team Profile
Team: Omega
Team Members: 3
Team Rank: Master
->Members
Species: Typhlosion
Gender: Male
Nickname: Alpha
Ability: Blaze
Moves:
-Flamethrower
-Agility
-Shadow Ball
-Eruption
Species: Empoleon
Gender: Male
Nickname: Zeta
Ability: Torrent
Moves:
-Metal Claw
-Drill Peck
-Bubblebeam
-Hydro Pump
Species: Leafeon
Gender: Female
Nickname: Phi
Ability: Leaf Guard
Moves:
-Giga Drain
-Leaf Blade
-Toxic
-Shadow Ball
Additional Info: Now these guys go WAY back, and they've seen
shitthings. You have my full support if you to want to make them a plot device or... Something else.Thanks all of you for sending in teams! I'll do my best to get as many as I can into the story!!
2282087 Hey this isn't that bad here is my Team
Name: Timeshift
Rank: Master
Members: 2
Species: Lucario
Nickname: Chance
Abilty: Inner Focus
Team role: Leader
Move set: Aura Sphere, Close Combat, Giga Impact, Earthquake
Species: Zoroark
Nickname: Shade
Ability: Illusion
Team role: Scout
Move Set: Foul Play, Punisment, Dark Pulse, Imprision
Note: These can be used but I must be notified of their use remember Copyrighted.
Here is my team.
Team name: Arcticbird
Rank: Whatever you want it to be. After all, It's your story.
Members:
Species/Name: Riolu/Riolu
Gender: Male
Abilities: Steadfast, Inner Focus
Leader
Moves: Focus Punch, Force Palm, Shadow Claw, Rock Slide
Species/Name: Cubone/Cubone
Gender: Male
Abilities: Lightning Rod, Rock Head
Moves: Double-edge, Bone Club, Bonemerang, Hidden Power (Attack: 90, Type: Grass)
Species/Name: Absol/Dangerzone
Gender: Female
Abilities: Pressure, Super Luck
Moves: Quick Attack, Bite, Ariel Ace, Thunderbolt
Well not bad I have to admit not bad. For my Oc team
Name:Protect
Rank:Master
Members:4
Umbreon
Role:Leader and Scout
Name:AJ
Ability:Inner focus
Moves:Psychic, Dark pulse, shadow ball, and retaliate
Swampert
Name:Flash Swimmer
ability:Torrent
role:Wall and combat specialist.
Moves:Surf, Ice beam, hydro cannon, and earthquake
(Not to be to op but I needed too)
Latios and Latias
names:(you make them up can't really think of any ideas)
role:Twin attackers
Abilities: Levitate
Moves(same for both):Thunderbolt, Ice beam, Psychic, and Dragon pulse
Hoped this helped, oh and for an idea I'll like a chapter when the guild master Take on one big threat but after 2 days Latios returns saying that they were taking a beating, at a high (but not to high level) dungeon Latios, Twilight, Pikachu, and fenniken Begins to go through it but then when the reach the top where the battle was, they see they groups fainted except the leaders aren't there, and latias tells them what happened, (plot twist the threat is a very strong enough psychic Type that can even it's psychic moves can affect dark types, and managed to to hypnotized the leaders then a huge battle begins, near the end only 3 of the leaders {One of them is umbreon} is broken out while the rest retreats). Go ahead if you want to use it just use the team if you don't want to Use the idea.