Sorry, I wrote this in like fifteen different sittings, and part of it was a collaboration with a friend. I'll be sure to resolve any tense issues the next chance I get.
I really love the story its good needs to b slowed down. A little and also Derpy Hipster what is the name of that show of which you posted that clip from I'm in to a lot of anime and haven't seen that yet
wow didn't think this would ever update...
Pick a tense.
Stick to it.
more.
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Sorry, I wrote this in like fifteen different sittings, and part of it was a collaboration with a friend. I'll be sure to resolve any tense issues the next chance I get.
I thought it was great. I forgot about this until I saw the automatic email in my drop box but once I remembered I was very happy. Keep it up!
YES! UPDATE!
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But then........
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At first I was like: encrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSUdjusw16jLKn1QlsLKsk6JGFsdr8vnIUhDfyVHytk9TJRCUTnMQ
But then........
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Fluttershy? A perv? IMPOSSIBLE! However...............
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And next I suspect will be (drum-roll)
APPLEJACK
I really love the story its good needs to b slowed down. A little and also Derpy Hipster what is the name of that show of which you posted that clip from I'm in to a lot of anime and haven't seen that yet
Another exciting episode. I look forward to reading the next.
PS: I'll bet it will be Pinky Pie! She'll want to join in "because it looks fun".