Teenage Mutant Ninja Bronies

by dbzponyninja

Episode 1 Welcome To Ponyville

Teenage Mutant Ninja Bronies Episode 1 Welcome To Ponyville by Evan Carlton Written on ‎October ‎29, ‎2012
Four Months ago Leonardo, Donatello and Michaelangelo became bronies that's right three of the four ninja turtles became fans of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Raphael and Master Splinter were the last ones to be converted.
Being the brains of the team Donatello created a portal to Equestria and was about to step through it however the alien Krang robots and Shredders were anti bronies and wished to kill not only The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and Master Splinter like they normally do but now they wish to kill every single pony, dragon, griffon, minotaur, buffalo, donkey, mule, dog, cat, rabbit, owl, phoenix, alligator and tortoise (Tank is a tortoise not a turtle) that has ever appeared in the show ever.
Anyway all four ninja turtles and Master Splinter used the portal and wound up in Ponyville in the land of Equestria they tried to hold their excitement and fanboyism so as not to freak or creep out any ponies from their favorite cartoon show.

Upon setting foot in Ponyville Michaelangelo said "Fuyakasha you're invention worked Donnie I can't believe we're actually in Ponyville."

Donatello told Michaelangelo by changing one of Trixie's line so he's talking about himself in third person instead of saying the original line he said "it's true my enthusiastic little admirerers, Donatello is the smartest ninja turtle in New York City, was there ever any doubt."

Michaelangelo joked around with Donatello by saying "ah yes you are The Great and Powerful Donatello, thank you for inventing this portal."

Master Splinter told his adopted sons since he is a talking mutant ninja rat and not a turtle "enough joking my sons, let's go so I can hug all of The Mane Six and The Cutie Mark Crusaders."

Raphael said "I can't believe i'm saying this since i'm the strong, tough ninja turtle but I agree with Master Splinter hugs for everypony especially Rainbow Dash she's my favorite Mane Six pony never before has a tomboy been so cute." (underneath his breath Raphael said to himself so Michaelangelo wouldn't here him "curse you Mikey why did you have to get me to watch this show, I think it's turning me into a big softie."

All four ninja turtles and Master Splinter said at the same time "yeah let's go."

Donatello, Leonardo, Master Splinter, Michaelangelo and Raphael barely stepped five inches when a familiar pony with a pink fur coat and a pink curly mane and tail ran up to them and said while talking fast so it was hard to understand her "hi i'm Pinkie Pie i've never seen any of you before you must be new and if you're new that means you just moved here because I know everypony and I mean everypony in Ponyville although you're not ponies you're four talking turtles and a rat anyway bye."

When she got done talking and ran off Michaelangelo said after laughing for a few minutes "oh Pinkie Pie you are so random and hillarious that's why you're my favorite pony from The Mane Six well that and because you always try and make everypony smile and happy plus I just love her singing voice."

Leonardo said "ok can we go see my favorite Mane Six pony now I want to see Applejack and I also want to show Big Macintosh my impression of him."

Donatello said actually "I believe that Twilight Sparkle and Spike's Library Treehouse is closer why don't we go see them first."

The other three members of The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles told Donatello "you're just saying that because Twilight is you're favorite Mane Six pony aren't you?"

Donatello told them "what no I mean yeah she is my favorite but her house is closer so can we please just go."

Leonardo said "fine but after we get done we're going to Sweet Apple Acres to see Applejack and Big Macintosh and most likely The CMC since their clubhouse is close to the Sweet Apple Acres barnhouse and apple farm."
However while they were on their way to Twilight Sparkle's Library Treehouse Shredder and the alien Krang robots jumped through Donatello's portal that he forgot to close after they turned it on and jumped through.
Shredder also brought several of his Foot Clan Ninja with him as well but they along with Shredder and the alien Krang robots were all defeated however even though the ninja turtles and Master Splinter succeeded in both defeating their enemies and keeping the ponies of Ponyville safe they were knocked out and injured in the battle and woke up in the same Ponyville hospital that Rainbow Dash was in when she injured her wing and the same hospital that Poundcake and Pumpkin Cake were born in.
While they were opening their eyes and waking up the ninja turtles and Master Splinter could hear The Mane Six and Derpy Hooves talking to Nurse Redheart and Dr. Monitor.

All six members of The Mane Six asked Nurse Redheart and Dr. Monitor at the same time "are you sure they're alright we need to know they did risk their very lives to save us after all."

Nurse Redheart told Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Twilight Sparkle "the patients are fine we took care of their injuries and wounds, they just need their rest for now, they should be out of the hospital by tomorrow."

Derpy Hooves asked Nurse Redheart while hovering in mid air with her pegasus wings after setting the muffin basket that she was holding by the handle in her mouth "ooh ooh can I leave them my muffin basket and get well soon card anyway?"

Nurse Redheart was about to answer the pegasus mare with a grey fur coat and blonde mane and tail's question however Michaelangelo said "sure just set it down right over there Derpy."

All of the ponies in the hospital room turned around to see that the ninja turtles and Master Splinter were in fact awake however Derpy was the first one to speak by asking them "how do you know my name?"

All four ninja turtles and Master Splinter told her at the same time "that's kind of a long story which we'll tell you after we get out of the hospital tomorrow."

Applejack said in the trademark southern accent that all members of the apple family talk in "well looks like ya'll are doing just fine, you'll be out of here in no time."

Fluttershy told them in the soft almost quiet voice that she talks in "i'm so glad the five of you are safe."

Rainbow Dash told them "the way the five of you fought those bad guys was awesome, you all rock."

Pinkie Pie told them "ooh I should throw the five of you a thank you for saving all of our lives party when you get out of the hospital tomorrow, by the way I forgot to ask you what your names were when I met you earlier this morning."

Donatello told her "my name is Donatello but you can call me Donnie for short."

Leonardo told her "my name is Leonardo but you can call me Leo for short."

Michaelangelo told her "my name is Michaelangelo but you can call me Mikey for short."

Raphael told her "my name is Raphael but you can call me Raph for short."

Master Splinter told her "and my name is Master Splinter I am their sensei."

Rarity asked them in both a curious tone and her trademark British accent that she talks in "sensei what's a sensei darlings?"

Master Splinter told the unicorn mare with a white fur coat and a long purple indigo mane and tail "sensei is the Japanese word for teacher but I am not a school teacher like Cheerilee I am their ninja teacher/ instructor."

Rainbow Dash told them after temporarily squishing her face to where she looked like a fish "so wait that means you're ninja turtles, that is so awesome can you teach my pet tortoise Tank how to be a ninja too?"

Master Splinter told the pegasus mare with a blue fur coat and a rainbow colored mane and tail that has shades of red, blue, green, yellow, orange and purple on it "probably not I was able to teach my sons here because they are talking teenage mutant turtles."

Rainbow Dash said to Master Splinter "shoot and I was so excited too."

Dr. Monitor told all six members of The Mane Six and Derpy Hooves "alright alright that's enough questions for now the umm ninja turtles and Master Splinter aren't completly healed yet and need their rest and visiting hours are over so the seven of you need to leave."

Twilight Sparkle asked Dr. Monitor "ok can we thank them for saving our lives and tell them goodbye before we leave though?"
Dr. Monitor agreed and then all six members of The Mane Six and Derpy Hooves thanked them for saving their lives and told them goodbye before leaving their hospital room and exiting the hosptial. The End.

Comments

[flutterlover 23479]

I am sorry but this is really bad I couldn't bare to read more than a few paragraps but I know how you feel my stories sucks to I just hope for a second chance

[Wildebeest]

Okay... first few paragraphs and there are already a few problems.

Four Months ago Leonardo, Donatello and Michaelangelo became bronies that's right three of the four ninja turtles became fans of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Raphael and Master Splinter were the last ones to be converted.

Okay, HOW? What was it about the show that appealed to them? Why did Raphael and Master Splinter take so much longer than the others? Actually, how would they know about the show in the first place? I can't imagine that they watch all that much TV down in the sewers.

Being the brains of the team Donatello created a portal to Equestria and was about to step through it

Wait, what? WHEN? You can't just throw this at the readers and expect them to accept that Donatello was somehow able to perfect a portal that leads to another fictional world. Donatello does machines, but Donatello doesn't do magic. You're throwing way too much at the reader in too little time.

however the alien Krang robots and Shredders were anti bronies and wished to kill not only The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and Master Splinter like they normally do but now they wish to kill every single pony, dragon, griffon, minotaur, buffalo, donkey, mule, dog, cat, rabbit, owl, phoenix, alligator and tortoise (Tank is a tortoise not a turtle) that has ever appeared in the show ever.

Wait, what? WHY? How do they even know about Donatello's portal and why are they so hell-bent on committing genocide on another universe? Yes, I know they're evil, but there has to be some logic.

Anyway all four ninja turtles and Master Splinter used the portal and wound up in Ponyville in the land of Equestria they tried to hold their excitement and fanboyism so as not to freak or creep out any ponies from their favorite cartoon show.

I think they'd already be creeped out by the fact that there are four giant talking mutated turtles and a giant talking mutated rat walking through their town.

Master Splinter told his adopted sons since he is a talking mutant ninja rat and not a turtle "enough joking my sons, let's go so I can hug all of The Mane Six and The Cutie Mark Crusaders."

Okay, I'm no expert on TMNT, but I know enough about the show to know that Master Splinter would never say that.

Anyway, to conclude, the story concept has some potential, but the story itself needs some work.

[mycutiemarkisagun]

......well I don't see any of you other fuckers writing a MLP/TMNT crossover!