The pegasus gasped as well, making out with the unicorn more and more passionately...
Rainbow fucks so well that Dusk has become a unicorn again. is it possible to perceive the ending as an allusion to the next part, in which it turns out that the spell did not hold?
Doing her morning jog, the pegasus, Rainbow Dash was finishing up her routine; and just in time as the mailmare was just bringing her mail.
The second sentence of the story has multiple grammar issues. The semicolon is incorrect, as it should be a comma instead, and it needs a comma after "Rainbow Dash". This needs editing.
I think you meant mail
I don't know how that cover art was aloud
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Technically, yes. As it is implied but doesn't show anything. But I will edit it further a moderator believes it's too revealing.
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Thank you for the sharp eyes
Rainbow fucks so well that Dusk has become a unicorn again.
is it possible to perceive the ending as an allusion to the next part, in which it turns out that the spell did not hold?
Haven't seen you post a Dusk Shine story in years. Quite refreshing to see that you can still write the character well.
I'm a fool who thought the title said PlayStation for some reason, hence my confusion.
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Wow, I'm gonna need an editor at this rate
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Thanks, he's not a common request for commissions. But is fun to do.
The second sentence of the story has multiple grammar issues. The semicolon is incorrect, as it should be a comma instead, and it needs a comma after "Rainbow Dash". This needs editing.
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Thank you
You this was hot. Will there be more set in this plot?
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Yes
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Sweeeeett, can't wait!
She'll be even more incorrigible if she gets knocked up.