The void was saturated with the roar of falling water. The distant horizon glowed with yellow light, but I could not see it. I knew the sky above stared down at me through enormous disk-like eyes, but I could not look up.
My limbs refused to respond to my command, not that my mind was issuing any.
I gazed at the whirlpool below.
‘What is the meaning of…this… dream.’
The parasite’s voice started out with its normal fiery confidence, but the maw below seemed to swallow that arrogance.
The parasite wisely remained silent as the underwater tornado swirled
Then my voice echoed through the nothingness without my input. It was filled with glee and torn by static.
“The Lord of Above and Beneath.”
The eyes above blinked and the water began to drain faster.
“The Black Sea of Infinite Teeth.”
Triangles poked through the crashing waves, jutting upwards, daring the sky to meet the water.
“See the tides and weep.”
The catastrophe grew in size as the living hole opened wider. When staring into depths, one could also imagine logic and reason drowning.
“For the tithes of knowing.”
The images of water faded away to reveal that the maw did not consume the ocean, but rather, reality itself. Shifting patches of emptiness fell down its throat as seafoam turned to nebulae and waves became clusters of stars.
“Cut deep.”
The parasite screamed as the gaping jaw of Entropy consumed existence itself, and the unimaginable being giggled as galaxies fell into nothing.
“You know them.”
The parasite’s breathing had quickened to a frantic pace, each gasp rasping against the back of her throat. Every eye in the night sky turned to her and the swirling abyss laughed with a trillion different voices. The cacophony borne of mirth and hate almost drowned out my final words. Almost.
“And they know you.”
Another scream tore itself from her throat as the parasite fled the vision through a static purple portal. I do not know for certain, but I can guess that the echoes of Entropy’s derision followed her to wherever she hid.
I felt no pity.
Why would I?
very good short but with how the story is told it probably dose not matter
This...is awesome. I love every bit of it. Keep ‘er goin’ mate
Do you ever plan on returning to this story?
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i'm wrapping the final chap of my main story, then I plan to come back and ifx this fic up.
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Thank you
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Also, if your main story is chaotic, vestige, I quite like that one. I hope it’s not too stressful and you have a good day:D
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oh, thanks. But no worries, the last chapter is mostly drafted, just gotta add a couple things before I get another round of editing and the posting
Good story. Worth noting you haven't removed the Hiatus status yet, though I imagine that will happen when the next chapter comes. I probably should have read this sooner.
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yep, gonna be revamping this thing
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Revamp how? Does that just mean you’re going to rewrite some of it? Or just continue onwards?
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rewrite, the writing in this thing is good imo, but the plot feels pretty much directionless
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No? Fatal Error wants to escape, Celestia wants them to get information out of Terek who presumably wants to not be tortured and eventually escape, Nightmare Moon wants to corrupt Luna and requests aid from Fatal. All that is left is for complications to start happening.