Well that was a info dump to say the least and not even in a bad way I'd say this was worth the wait but that aint true It was TOTALLY worth it I do wonder if sombra will actually offer good advice throughout the story possibly like a Kurama type thing or is just gonna go all sukana on shadey and just completely screw him over but I guess we'll figure that out throughout the story then but seriously this was a good chapter for explaining the situation and if you can keep going into detail about situations like these then keep at it
Yes, quite a HEFTY (HEFTY HEFTY *snrk*) info dump; I'm impressed with how you wrote it though, because I didn't skip nearly as much as I usually do! I don't know. I feel like there is something really significant buried in the jargon, but I also feel somewhat like I shouldn't expect to get any payoff from this... introduction course in whatever kind of magic system you're attempting to establish.
Oh, let me try it this way: I feel like I didn't pay close enough attention in class while receiving an important lecture There is a hazy fog of vagueness veiling my ability to follow (the plot *snrk*) what is happening here.
Well that was a info dump to say the least and not even in a bad way I'd say this was worth the wait but that aint true It was TOTALLY worth it I do wonder if sombra will actually offer good advice throughout the story possibly like a Kurama type thing or is just gonna go all sukana on shadey and just completely screw him over but I guess we'll figure that out throughout the story then but seriously this was a good chapter for explaining the situation and if you can keep going into detail about situations like these then keep at it
Yes, quite a HEFTY (HEFTY HEFTY *snrk*) info dump; I'm impressed with how you wrote it though, because I didn't skip nearly as much as I usually do!
I don't know. I feel like there is something really significant buried in the jargon, but I also feel somewhat like I shouldn't expect to get any payoff from this... introduction course in whatever kind of magic system you're attempting to establish.
Oh, let me try it this way: I feel like I didn't pay close enough attention in class while receiving an important lecture
There is a hazy fog of vagueness veiling my ability to follow (the plot *snrk*) what is happening here.