I... want to see... Rarity get involved in this. It seems like something that would be so far outside of her comfort zone that it seems like something she might be willing to do with friends near by. She's high class, high society at heart, and "why would someone like that want to... do that... with an animal?" If not Rarity... Rainbow. She and AJ are competitive to a fault. I wanna see Rainbow compete with AJ at some point about who can either take more animal cock or who can get their stud of the evening off faster. Or... maybe... Sci Twi. She's a book worm. Maybe she wants to get involved so she can study, up close and personal, the mating habits of certain critters. Also, loving these so far.

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Thank you very much, glad you are enjoying them! It's also good to know that a sequel is wanted, so I'll keep writing and possibly make this a series before moving on to something else, but I digress. Your character suggestions are interesting and definitely plausible, I'll give them a think while writing the sequel and we'll see how it goes :)

The story felt lacking for some reason. The only word I could use to explain is lack of passion during the sex scenes.

The paragraphs in these chapters felt ... blockier? Thicker? Formatting didn't feel as smooth as the previous story.

Best of luck on the possible sequel.

-Sky66

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I'm sorry to hear that you didn't like this story as much as the previous one. The formatting issue is unfortunate, though the way I "style" the paragraphs is probably something I'm not able to quantify or necessarily change without hindering the flow of the sentences. As for the sex scenes not being very passionate, I can only apologize. I attempt to be descriptive and believable during those scenes, but obviously I'm not quite hitting the mark, but don't get me wrong, I greatly appreciate your feedback and will try to do better in future.

P.S. In case you are interested, the possibility of a sequel is now a certainty! I look forward to your opinion on it, negative or positive.

The obvious candidate for joining next would be Sunset, but there are a bajillion SunsetxHorse fics on this site so Ima hafta wait and see.

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I agree, most of the bestiality fics I've seen feature Sunset, not to say they are bad of course, but it has been done before. However, before people can go calling me a hypocrite, I'm very aware that there are also plenty of bestiality fics that feature Applejack and Fluttershy, so I'm not exactly original with my idea. But I digress, for those who want to know, I don't have any intention of bringing Sunset Shimmer into it unless people really want it.

i agree with the first user it would be great to see rarity involved here

It would be great to see rarity get fucked by a horse (and how could it not be brutal if this part was the first time for rarity "to be deflowered by the horse")

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Well I'm still writing the sequel at the moment, Rarity might be in it, but then again she might not be, you'll have to wait and see!

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yes please