Shining Armor you magnificent bastard, Well Lock and Load main three bring the war of hell to Them.😎 One more to go. nicely done on this chapter, I hope the last one is going to be good.🔫
"Perfect, once we send the Changelings back, we'll bring him here to restore order," Pinkie said.
Hope not. Please no reset button. There needs to be permanent consequences for Sunset's "actions". It's only fair considering there are ones for Twilight's.
"The ones watching this, duh," Pinkie Pie uses her blade to point at the screen where the reader reading this part of the section is looking. She waves. "I see you," Pinkie said joyfully.
Meta Pinkie breaking the fourth wall isn't funny it's stupid and ruins the flow of the story. Please don't do it again.
11015944 Which is why I added the word please. Originally it wasn't in my comment, but I added it since I didn't want to be rude and make it a demand. If it's still rude sorry, but I was just asking if you could consider it. Go ahead and write how you want and I will continue to critique it as I see fit.
"The ones watching this, duh," Pinkie Pie uses her blade to point at the screen where the reader reading this part of the section is looking. She waves. "I see you," Pinkie said joyfully.
😨 Perfect time to be surprised and creep the hell out of me.😨
11015947 Well, now I saw it. I understand the concern but I'm going forth with the wall-breaking. As I said, I don't do it often. It's not consistent so, it's staying.
11015966 Night dude. I should be finished with the final chapter or the next chapter of Spike the Fairy in a while longer. I'm working on both while listening to horror music.
11015953 To be completely frank with you that's not really a good justification. I don't care if that is the first and only time you do it. If it's bad it's bad. Go ahead and do it if you want but telling me you don't do it all the time doesn't make it ok.
11016041 There's only one chapter left so I don't mind staying to finish it. Also I'm not trying to prevent him from doing what he wants. I am simply giving my thoughts on it and his fic. If he takes what I write into consideration great, if not oh well.
11016026 You only think it's bad. My justification is firm cause it's how I feel about my story. You do what you want with your stories and how you tell them. As for me, I'm going to tell it how I want.
11016294 Except your justification wasn't an opinion. It was a statement of fact that you don't do it much. My point still stands. Just because you don't do something bad or cringe worthy, is more accurate to how I would describe it, often doesn't mean it's fine. It's still a cringe worthy moment. You seem really defensive over this. Just take the criticism and whatever you decide to do with it is up to you. I don't care if you listen and change it or if you ignore it, but if you are going to make a justification for it with faulty logic I am going to respond and explain how it's faulty. Free speech works both ways. No one is denying you can tell your stories how you see fit, but I also get to critique it and respond to your justifications and explanations how I see fit.
11016310 You are pissing me off. I'm defending my work for how I see fit cause I'm having fun writing.
No one is denying you can tell your stories how you see fit,
You just told me last night
Meta Pinkie breaking the fourth wall isn't funny it's stupid and ruins the flow of the story. Please don't do it again.
You asked me to not do something within my story ever again because you don't like it. News flash, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. I don't force anyone to read my story, my content.
You can critique, I do listen and I decide whether to input it or not. For months, you've been on my case about Sunset Shimmer's involvement and her Equestrian side. I didn't want to say it earlier cause I was foreshadowing into this story. I had enough of your crap. Now, you can stop reading and go look story you like. One that doesn't have Pinkie Pie breaking the fourth wall.
The fact you keep saying I will write how I want is kind of making me paranoid you missed me saying that. Nice to get confirmation you know that is what I said.
You asked me to not do something within my story ever again because you don't like it. News flash, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. I don't force anyone to read my story, my content.
Yeah, I asked. Now that you gave your answer, I accept it. Yes, I find your justification lackluster, but I accepted your answer and am not telling you what to do. Also news flash you have to read, watch, or experience something in whatever way to actually know if you like it or not and since there is one chapter left in this fic I will finish it. As for the main one, there is no current issue large enough for me to stop reading and for all I know there might be something in a future chapter that makes me like the spike the fairy fic more. I am willing to give it a chance.
Look calm down. Again I am giving my thoughts on things. If you can't handle that, I don't know what to tell you. I'm not going to apologize for my thoughts on things. You didn't actually foreshadowed anything. You just had Sunset have doubts about staying in Equestria, despite insisting and even seeming sure about it with no hint of doubt in an earlier chapter, than had Starlight tell her to return for closure with the announcement of this side story. It was all out of the blue. Yes, I have been on your case for bringing in Sunset because there was no point to it. If she plays an important role later in the main fic than my view on that will change at least slightly, but we'll see.
11016333 I'm going to write how I want. If it makes you feel paranoid, I don't know what to tell you. I'm having fun with this. Be careful of what you say, you may piss off the wrong person.
I'm not one for getting angry but you are pushing it. You are the first to push it throughout my entire span on this site. I never had this problem until today. This is for you. She does play a fucking important role later in the main story. I didn't want to say the spoiler but you are pissing me off.
There is a place at the moment when I bring characters in. Get that shit through your head. The main story is bigger than anything I ever worked on and there's lots more to go.
11016349 Geez dude I don't know why you are getting all worked up. You said I can critique your work and you didn't seem to have any issues with me doing it until now. What's your issue? All I am doing is responding calmly to you and giving my thoughts. I don't know why you are getting triggered. I didn't ask for your spoiler, though thank you. To be honest it's vague enough and something that someone might guess could happen that I actually don't see why you would conceal it, but you do you. I was paranoid that you don't actually seem to read the entirely of my comments since I kept saying you can go ahead and write how you want and you keep repeating it to me like I am not acknowledging it, when I actually do. Yes, I understand you tend to bring in characters out of the blue, but my issue is why when they at the time don't contribute much. Yes, I know there is more to come to the main story I was the one to ask a while back. Look you might want to take a break and calm down. I just don't understand why you are getting angry. I'm not trying to piss you off and you are really confusing me.
11016374 I’m no police, but I can tell the disturbance of the comments section as well. Of The TONE of your words that you type down and post on like a sick little troll on stories. I can tell you have sick pleasure for nitpicking stories of the sentence with criticism, criticism is one thing we can all Tolerate, but nick-picking on the story of the paragraph, sentence, and butchery Smacking the author to face, NOW YOU'RE PUSHING IT! You have gone down the rabbit hole again did you? DID YOU?!?!
And don’t you try to play be a victim card on me. Of all the stories that you read with criticism on Stories why this one now. And you have the gull to pick one of the reader's comments Nick-picking and Threw their words to the face what is your issue? I can tell your already typing and using my words to threw on me just make you feel better. It’s not going to work in your favor.
Look I understand you may not like the story that my friend PonyJoel Writing, I have a question for you do you have The pleasure of nick picking and made him/her trigger for your sick amusement, A simple yes or no. If yes I want you to leave PonyJoel stories out of it never come here again to harass him ever again. He’s my friend, my brother. I will protect his story that I love reading. If you have a problem with me, say to my face.🙎🏽♂️ I’ll be waiting.
I’m no police, but I can tell the disturbance of the comments section as well. Of The TONE of your words that you type down and post on like a sick little troll on stories.
Tone of words? Considering, it's impossible to know for sure the tone from text, you are way off. I was mostly calm when typing it out, but if you want to imagine me being annoyed or rude while typing fine, but that wasn't my intention. I still don't know what I'm supposedly doing that's making Joel angry and if he wants to finally answer that question great because I legitimately don't know.
I can tell you have sick pleasure for nitpicking stories of the sentence with criticism, criticism is one thing we can all Tolerate, but nick-picking on the story of the paragraph, sentence, and butchery Smacking the author to face, NOW YOU'RE PUSHING IT! You have gone down the rabbit hole again did you? DID YOU?!?!
Not everything I critique are nitpicks about the main fic. Some were actually major issues that went unnoticed or addressed, but even if they were, so what? If it's valid even if it's small, it's still criticism. Even if it's not, I don't see why you all are getting so worked up over it.
And don’t you try to play be a victim card on me. Of all the stories that you read with criticism on Stories why this one now. And you have the gull to pick one of the reader's comments Nick-picking and Threw their words to the face what is your issue? I can tell your already typing and using my words to threw on me just make you feel better. It’s not going to work in your favor.
Again the fuck does that matter, if I critique this fic. I happen to critique many fics that have something that annoyed me, some within the time frame of this one, so don't act like I am only targeting this one. Even if I was, so what? The only comments I responded to were replies to me! If Joel would have ignored my original criticism, or simply say he's not changing with a reason that was his opinion or a valid reason the conversation would have ended there. No, he gave a flawed reason and I explain why it's flawed. I'm not trying to act like the victim, but I am trying to understand why Joel got so irritated and if it was something I actually did make up for it, but I don't think I did anything to warrant his attitude and if anything him and you are the ones with the victim complex, but go ahead and explain what I'm doing that's terrible.
Look I understand you may not like the story that my friend PonyJoel Writing, I have a question for you do you have The pleasure of nick picking and made him/her trigger for your sick amusement, A simple yes or no. If yes I want you to leave PonyJoel stories out of it never come here again to harass him ever again. He’s my friend, my brother. I will protect his story that I love reading. If you have a problem with me and say to my face.🙎🏽♂️ I’ll be waiting.
Yeah, I already answered that. In fact i answered it in my last response to Joel that he never answered. I am not trying to piss him off and am confused that it happened and am wondering why he got pissed. If I could finally get an answer to that great.
Again the fuck does that matter if I critique this fic. I happen to critique many fics that have something that annoyed me, some within the time frame of this one, so don't act like I am only targeting this one. Even if I was, so what? The only comments I responded to were replies to me! If Joel would have ignored my original criticism, or simply say he's not changing with a reason that was his opinion or a valid reason the conversation would have ended there. No, he gave a flawed reason and I explain why it's flawed. I'm not trying to act like the victim, but I am trying to understand why Joel got so irritated and if it was something I actually did make up for it, but I don't think I did anything to warrant his attitude and if anything he and you are the ones with the victim complex, but go ahead and explain what I'm doing that's terrible.
You may be right, and I thank you for answering me. I Apologize for my uproar to you SuperEthan2. PonyJoel was just asking for my help to see what going on in stories fic, besides I don't want to deal with real-life drama. We just want to enjoy reading good stories with good character development with the good journey they endure with the flaws of the stories. no more no less. of course, you're right maybe we need to cool our jets including mine as well, I don't want to deal with this crazy shit that we are now. I understand where your coming from and for that I thank you. can we just drop this subject and leave it behind we want our weekend back please.🍵🌙
11016828 Well, SuperEthan2 can you please just don't bother Ponyjoel's head and let him do his thing on the stories please, answers will come soon and you had to be patient on this. That's all I'm asking. thank you.🍵
11016880 Again, I have no control over him and has said he can do his thing. I'm not going to stop critiquing the fic and if he can't handle that, I don't know what to tell you all. Even if answers come or not, that changes nothing, as I only critique what I read at the moment of my comment. If it gets answered later, great and if not, or well, but I am not going to stop critiquing simply because there might be an answer for it later on.
11016918 Sigh. It's not a matter of being patient. When a chapter is released I give my thoughts or critique on that chapter on it's own merits. While I understand it might be address later, I still critique it because I don't have access to later chapters that might or might not address it. For all I know it could have been one of my comments that led to Joel or whoever to address it. Later chapters potentially answering it doesn't mean you shouldn't bring it up in a review. That is how I feel about it.
11016937 I Apologize, That's was my bad on my part I didn't mean to piss you off. So you're saying about "you can't control the free will of the character of the story" is that it? I See what are you referring to, man now I feel like a real Heel to myself.
11016931 Anyway just get some sleep we all need a good night's rest that same goes for me and most of all there goes my weekend wasted yeah, Thanks a lot, SuperEthan2 all that drama for nothing.🌙
11016947 No, I acknowledge that Joel can write how they see fit and all I can do is critique their work. Whatever Joel decides to do I have no control over. I have said that multiple times and yet Joel keeps repeating they can and you are telling me to let them, when I am. It just seems like somehow you and Joel are acting like I am saying the opposite when all I am doing is giving my thoughts. Whatever Joel decides to do with it is up to them. That is what I meant. Nothing about the characters of the story.
11016954 Way to exaggerate. Yeah, a handful of comments definitely takes up two days worth of time. Not to mention you made the decision to take part. If you consider this a waste of time you could have stopped at any time. Don't pin you decision on me, especially something that doesn't make sense like this. Not to mention you still have Sunday to enjoy yourself. If you are trying to make me feel bad make sure it something that's actually valid.
11016960 Now that understand, thank you for clearing it up for me. Right now I'm tired and I want to sleep. Alright can we discuss this tomorrow, and please give Ponyjoel some space so he can get some R&R and a good night's rest as well, please that's what I'm asking.😴🌙
Shining Armor you magnificent bastard, Well Lock and Load main three bring the war of hell to Them.😎 One more to go. nicely done on this chapter, I hope the last one is going to be good.🔫
11015922
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
11015923
Hope the last chapter will be good, so Happy Early Holloween. 🔪🎃
11015926
And Nightmare Night.
11015931
Indeed.🎃👻
11015934
Anything caught you by surprise in this chapter?
Hope not. Please no reset button. There needs to be permanent consequences for Sunset's "actions". It's only fair considering there are ones for Twilight's.
Meta Pinkie breaking the fourth wall isn't funny it's stupid and ruins the flow of the story. Please don't do it again.
11015943
It's my story. I'll write whether or not if Pinkie breaks the fourth wall. Also, I don't do it often.
As for the consequences part, you'll have to wait and see what happens in the last chapter, alright?
11015944
Which is why I added the word please. Originally it wasn't in my comment, but I added it since I didn't want to be rude and make it a demand. If it's still rude sorry, but I was just asking if you could consider it. Go ahead and write how you want and I will continue to critique it as I see fit.
11015936
😨 Perfect time to be surprised and creep the hell out of me.😨
11015947
Well, now I saw it. I understand the concern but I'm going forth with the wall-breaking. As I said, I don't do it often. It's not consistent so, it's staying.
11015953
Hey, PonyJoel you alright?
11015961
I'm fine.
11015962
Well, Don't worry at least I enjoying your story I hope for good reading on the last chapter. well good night and take care of yourself.😴🌙
11015966
Night dude. I should be finished with the final chapter or the next chapter of Spike the Fairy in a while longer. I'm working on both while listening to horror music.
11015967
nice, well good then.🌙
11015953
To be completely frank with you that's not really a good justification. I don't care if that is the first and only time you do it. If it's bad it's bad. Go ahead and do it if you want but telling me you don't do it all the time doesn't make it ok.
11016026
If it bothers you so much, then stop reading it then
Let him put whatever he thinks is necessary for his story
11016041
There's only one chapter left so I don't mind staying to finish it. Also I'm not trying to prevent him from doing what he wants. I am simply giving my thoughts on it and his fic. If he takes what I write into consideration great, if not oh well.
11016026
You only think it's bad. My justification is firm cause it's how I feel about my story. You do what you want with your stories and how you tell them. As for me, I'm going to tell it how I want.
11016294
Except your justification wasn't an opinion. It was a statement of fact that you don't do it much. My point still stands. Just because you don't do something bad or cringe worthy, is more accurate to how I would describe it, often doesn't mean it's fine. It's still a cringe worthy moment. You seem really defensive over this. Just take the criticism and whatever you decide to do with it is up to you. I don't care if you listen and change it or if you ignore it, but if you are going to make a justification for it with faulty logic I am going to respond and explain how it's faulty. Free speech works both ways. No one is denying you can tell your stories how you see fit, but I also get to critique it and respond to your justifications and explanations how I see fit.
11016310
You are pissing me off. I'm defending my work for how I see fit cause I'm having fun writing.
You just told me last night
You asked me to not do something within my story ever again because you don't like it. News flash, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. I don't force anyone to read my story, my content.
You can critique, I do listen and I decide whether to input it or not. For months, you've been on my case about Sunset Shimmer's involvement and her Equestrian side. I didn't want to say it earlier cause I was foreshadowing into this story. I had enough of your crap. Now, you can stop reading and go look story you like. One that doesn't have Pinkie Pie breaking the fourth wall.
Have a nice day.
11016316
The fact you keep saying I will write how I want is kind of making me paranoid you missed me saying that. Nice to get confirmation you know that is what I said.
Yeah, I asked. Now that you gave your answer, I accept it. Yes, I find your justification lackluster, but I accepted your answer and am not telling you what to do. Also news flash you have to read, watch, or experience something in whatever way to actually know if you like it or not and since there is one chapter left in this fic I will finish it. As for the main one, there is no current issue large enough for me to stop reading and for all I know there might be something in a future chapter that makes me like the spike the fairy fic more. I am willing to give it a chance.
Look calm down. Again I am giving my thoughts on things. If you can't handle that, I don't know what to tell you. I'm not going to apologize for my thoughts on things. You didn't actually foreshadowed anything. You just had Sunset have doubts about staying in Equestria, despite insisting and even seeming sure about it with no hint of doubt in an earlier chapter, than had Starlight tell her to return for closure with the announcement of this side story. It was all out of the blue. Yes, I have been on your case for bringing in Sunset because there was no point to it. If she plays an important role later in the main fic than my view on that will change at least slightly, but we'll see.
11016333
I'm going to write how I want. If it makes you feel paranoid, I don't know what to tell you. I'm having fun with this. Be careful of what you say, you may piss off the wrong person.
I'm not one for getting angry but you are pushing it. You are the first to push it throughout my entire span on this site. I never had this problem until today. This is for you. She does play a fucking important role later in the main story. I didn't want to say the spoiler but you are pissing me off.
There is a place at the moment when I bring characters in. Get that shit through your head. The main story is bigger than anything I ever worked on and there's lots more to go.
11016349
Geez dude I don't know why you are getting all worked up. You said I can critique your work and you didn't seem to have any issues with me doing it until now. What's your issue? All I am doing is responding calmly to you and giving my thoughts. I don't know why you are getting triggered. I didn't ask for your spoiler, though thank you. To be honest it's vague enough and something that someone might guess could happen that I actually don't see why you would conceal it, but you do you. I was paranoid that you don't actually seem to read the entirely of my comments since I kept saying you can go ahead and write how you want and you keep repeating it to me like I am not acknowledging it, when I actually do. Yes, I understand you tend to bring in characters out of the blue, but my issue is why when they at the time don't contribute much. Yes, I know there is more to come to the main story I was the one to ask a while back. Look you might want to take a break and calm down. I just don't understand why you are getting angry. I'm not trying to piss you off and you are really confusing me.
11016374
Is there a problem sir.👮🏻♂️
11016374
I’m no police, but I can tell the disturbance of the comments section as well. Of The TONE of your words that you type down and post on like a sick little troll on stories. I can tell you have sick pleasure for nitpicking stories of the sentence with criticism, criticism is one thing we can all Tolerate, but nick-picking on the story of the paragraph, sentence, and butchery Smacking the author to face, NOW YOU'RE PUSHING IT! You have gone down the rabbit hole again did you? DID YOU?!?!
And don’t you try to play be a victim card on me. Of all the stories that you read with criticism on Stories why this one now. And you have the gull to pick one of the reader's comments Nick-picking and Threw their words to the face what is your issue? I can tell your already typing and using my words to threw on me just make you feel better. It’s not going to work in your favor.
Look I understand you may not like the story that my friend PonyJoel Writing, I have a question for you do you have The pleasure of nick picking and made him/her trigger for your sick amusement, A simple yes or no. If yes I want you to leave PonyJoel stories out of it never come here again to harass him ever again. He’s my friend, my brother. I will protect his story that I love reading. If you have a problem with me, say to my face.🙎🏽♂️ I’ll be waiting.
Tone of words? Considering, it's impossible to know for sure the tone from text, you are way off. I was mostly calm when typing it out, but if you want to imagine me being annoyed or rude while typing fine, but that wasn't my intention. I still don't know what I'm supposedly doing that's making Joel angry and if he wants to finally answer that question great because I legitimately don't know.
Not everything I critique are nitpicks about the main fic. Some were actually major issues that went unnoticed or addressed, but even if they were, so what? If it's valid even if it's small, it's still criticism. Even if it's not, I don't see why you all are getting so worked up over it.
Again the fuck does that matter, if I critique this fic. I happen to critique many fics that have something that annoyed me, some within the time frame of this one, so don't act like I am only targeting this one. Even if I was, so what? The only comments I responded to were replies to me! If Joel would have ignored my original criticism, or simply say he's not changing with a reason that was his opinion or a valid reason the conversation would have ended there. No, he gave a flawed reason and I explain why it's flawed. I'm not trying to act like the victim, but I am trying to understand why Joel got so irritated and if it was something I actually did make up for it, but I don't think I did anything to warrant his attitude and if anything him and you are the ones with the victim complex, but go ahead and explain what I'm doing that's terrible.
Yeah, I already answered that. In fact i answered it in my last response to Joel that he never answered. I am not trying to piss him off and am confused that it happened and am wondering why he got pissed. If I could finally get an answer to that great.
11016828
You may be right, and I thank you for answering me. I Apologize for my uproar to you SuperEthan2. PonyJoel was just asking for my help to see what going on in stories fic, besides I don't want to deal with real-life drama. We just want to enjoy reading good stories with good character development with the good journey they endure with the flaws of the stories. no more no less. of course, you're right maybe we need to cool our jets including mine as well, I don't want to deal with this crazy shit that we are now. I understand where your coming from and for that I thank you. can we just drop this subject and leave it behind we want our weekend back please.🍵🌙
11016828
Well, SuperEthan2 can you please just don't bother Ponyjoel's head and let him do his thing on the stories please, answers will come soon and you had to be patient on this. That's all I'm asking. thank you.🍵
11016880
Again, I have no control over him and has said he can do his thing. I'm not going to stop critiquing the fic and if he can't handle that, I don't know what to tell you all. Even if answers come or not, that changes nothing, as I only critique what I read at the moment of my comment. If it gets answered later, great and if not, or well, but I am not going to stop critiquing simply because there might be an answer for it later on.
11016908
Hmm, I see you need to be patient, answer will come out soon can you do that. all I ask you is the wait. Thank you.
11016908
you can't control a person's free will.
11016918
Sigh. It's not a matter of being patient. When a chapter is released I give my thoughts or critique on that chapter on it's own merits. While I understand it might be address later, I still critique it because I don't have access to later chapters that might or might not address it. For all I know it could have been one of my comments that led to Joel or whoever to address it. Later chapters potentially answering it doesn't mean you shouldn't bring it up in a review. That is how I feel about it.
11016931
Yeah that is exactly what I am saying. Why are you and Joel acting like I am saying the opposite? It's annoying and beginning to piss me off.
11016933
Alright, I understand completely. pleases just be careful what you say in the comment. I can tell you going to say no promises, right.
11016937
I Apologize, That's was my bad on my part I didn't mean to piss you off. So you're saying about "you can't control the free will of the character of the story" is that it? I See what are you referring to, man now I feel like a real Heel to myself.
11016931
Anyway just get some sleep we all need a good night's rest that same goes for me and most of all there goes my weekend wasted yeah, Thanks a lot, SuperEthan2 all that drama for nothing.🌙
11016947
No, I acknowledge that Joel can write how they see fit and all I can do is critique their work. Whatever Joel decides to do I have no control over. I have said that multiple times and yet Joel keeps repeating they can and you are telling me to let them, when I am. It just seems like somehow you and Joel are acting like I am saying the opposite when all I am doing is giving my thoughts. Whatever Joel decides to do with it is up to them. That is what I meant. Nothing about the characters of the story.
11016954
Way to exaggerate. Yeah, a handful of comments definitely takes up two days worth of time. Not to mention you made the decision to take part. If you consider this a waste of time you could have stopped at any time. Don't pin you decision on me, especially something that doesn't make sense like this. Not to mention you still have Sunday to enjoy yourself. If you are trying to make me feel bad make sure it something that's actually valid.
11016960
Now that understand, thank you for clearing it up for me. Right now I'm tired and I want to sleep. Alright can we discuss this tomorrow, and please give Ponyjoel some space so he can get some R&R and a good night's rest as well, please that's what I'm asking.😴🌙
11016967
🖕 That's all my pent up of emotion of rage to you good sir.
11016972
Sorry for not being Sorry. GoodNight, Sir.
Lmao, a FE 3H shoutout.