"To control the populous into her liking, she needed the perfect specimen to replicate a living person. When reports about two identical people, living in the same town, and on documentation, no such file of two exact people in their records; they heard one with magic power and the other as fragile as any other."
Ok, why? Why would that make them pick her out of countless other humans? I don't see the connection from point A, Sunset staying in human world to point B, the government's plan. It sounds like it would have happened regardless, but with someone else. Hoping for more answers other than vague evil clone plot that was abandoned, leading to human Sunset to unleashed this horror plot. Not to mention even though Twilight was right, Sunset deciding to stay in Equestria actually won't do anything to help. It seems to be too late for human Sunset, so Equestria Sunset can stay in the human world if she wants to. Yeah, you just proved to me the opposite of what I assume you set out to do in this fic. Well, one of the things, oops.
10999258 Sunset of Equestria and Sunset of the EQG in the same city at the same time would be the ideal component to start creating clones. The government sees that if two of the exact people can walk among them, why not control their creation and disregard everyone else. I'm going for a darker take. If Sunset Shimmer never came to the human world, the idea wouldn't have happened.
Well, R.I.P. Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy your sacrifices won't be in vain. ;_;7 Things are looking grim for EG including Sunset that goes to the rest of the entire town in ruins Damn.
Well, whom of thought the Government was involved in the first place to kidnapped the original Sunset EG for the Unholy experiments that she endure. Boy, I do despise princesses of Friendship when she was right about taking someone's life, what a piece of garbage filth. And like you said before stealing someone's identity has dire consequences.
Well, 4 down 2 more to go on this horror fest. this is getting good. 🥘🍺
Sunset of Equestria and Sunset of the EQG in the same city at the same time would be the ideal component to start creating clones. The government sees that if two of the exact people can walk among them, why not control their creation and disregard everyone else. If Sunset Shimmer never came to the human world, the idea wouldn't have happened.
The way human Sunset phrased it made it seem like Chrysalis came up with the idea then they noticed two Sunsets. You should have been clearer that she came up with it after. I still stand by Sunset staying or leaving won't make a difference, since if Human Sunset hadn't escape she would have likely still be trapped in the government facility.
"I'll tell you my tale. The horrors I experienced," Sunset gets comfortable on the couch chair. "A few years ago, Madam President Chrysalis thought the country would be prospering better with a more controlled populous. It takes one mind and wicked people to create an operation that'll wind up being their downfall."
"Wh-What did Madam President Chrysalis do to you..?" Fluttershy nervously asks. She sees her counterpart tightening her grip on the black pair of scissors.
"To control the populous into her liking, she needed the perfect specimen to replicate a living person. When reports about two identical people, living in the same town, and on documentation, no such file of two exact people in their records; they heard one with magic power and the other as fragile as any other."
"The Fall Formal..," Sunset remembers her demonic form when she tried to enslave everyone.
"While I was on my way to school, and this was before entering the eighth grade, two people, all in black, approached me and took me away to an underground facility where the Equestrian Government conducted their experiment. So, their purpose was to use my genetic makeup to create more copies to replicate every citizen in our country. They called the project, The Changeling. However, there was a major flaw in their works. They created the body, the aspects of the person. But, they weren't able to replicate a soul. The duplicates were then tethered to their opposites, mimicking their everyday lives. With further study, they deemed their project worthless. They abandoned their work and left me behind to rot."
Absolutely nothing about that gives the indication that she came up with it when she noticed two Sunsets. Reading through it again makes me think she had the idea in mind then she noticed the Sunsets, despite knowing better. Yeah, her Phrasing isn't the best, though it might just be me. We'll let everyone else decide for themselves.
Why go from Fairy Tail, to the horror movie: Us??!! And why the heck does most of the human Mane Six die??!! Why!!!! How would Discord, Pony Mane Five, Union Seven, and even Spike/Fairy Tail feel about this dark f*** up mess in the human world??!!
Ok, why? Why would that make them pick her out of countless other humans? I don't see the connection from point A, Sunset staying in human world to point B, the government's plan. It sounds like it would have happened regardless, but with someone else. Hoping for more answers other than vague evil clone plot that was abandoned, leading to human Sunset to unleashed this horror plot. Not to mention even though Twilight was right, Sunset deciding to stay in Equestria actually won't do anything to help. It seems to be too late for human Sunset, so Equestria Sunset can stay in the human world if she wants to. Yeah, you just proved to me the opposite of what I assume you set out to do in this fic. Well, one of the things, oops.
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Sunset of Equestria and Sunset of the EQG in the same city at the same time would be the ideal component to start creating clones. The government sees that if two of the exact people can walk among them, why not control their creation and disregard everyone else. I'm going for a darker take. If Sunset Shimmer never came to the human world, the idea wouldn't have happened.
Well, R.I.P. Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy your sacrifices won't be in vain. ;_;7 Things are looking grim for EG including Sunset that goes to the rest of the entire town in ruins Damn.
Well, whom of thought the Government was involved in the first place to kidnapped the original Sunset EG for the Unholy experiments that she endure. Boy, I do despise princesses of Friendship when she was right about taking someone's life, what a piece of garbage filth. And like you said before stealing someone's identity has dire consequences.
Well, 4 down 2 more to go on this horror fest. this is getting good. 🥘🍺
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The way human Sunset phrased it made it seem like Chrysalis came up with the idea then they noticed two Sunsets. You should have been clearer that she came up with it after. I still stand by Sunset staying or leaving won't make a difference, since if Human Sunset hadn't escape she would have likely still be trapped in the government facility.
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Chrysalis and the government made the idea when they found out about two Sunsets being in the same city. Sunset's phrasing is correct.
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Absolutely nothing about that gives the indication that she came up with it when she noticed two Sunsets. Reading through it again makes me think she had the idea in mind then she noticed the Sunsets, despite knowing better. Yeah, her Phrasing isn't the best, though it might just be me. We'll let everyone else decide for themselves.
Why go from Fairy Tail, to the horror movie: Us??!! And why the heck does most of the human Mane Six die??!! Why!!!! How would Discord, Pony Mane Five, Union Seven, and even Spike/Fairy Tail feel about this dark f*** up mess in the human world??!!
I just hope they punish the government for this.
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You'll have to wait and see.
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I hope it's good.
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Ditto.☕☕☕☕