Applejack needs help and her friends come to the rescue
One piece of advice would be to shorten your paragraphs. As they are now, it’s like a big wall of text to read and you can get lost in the middle of them.
10144490I noticed that and have already done the changes for the next one. (And when I have free time will change this one to look a bit better)
One piece of advice would be to shorten your paragraphs. As they are now, it’s like a big wall of text to read and you can get lost in the middle of them.
10144490
I noticed that and have already done the changes for the next one. (And when I have free time will change this one to look a bit better)