She selected an opening between the shrubs and stole into the undergrowth, keeping her head low. Immediately the sigh of the wind through the outer edges of the trees was muffled and she suddenly felt incredibly closed in. But nothing terrible happened, so she crept a little further forward until she had penetrated the outer barrier of the forest. The bushes thinned out slightly, not into a path, but enough that she wasn’t having to push past the denser foliage. Her gamble paid off, and already she could spot bushes that hadn’t yet been stripped off their juicy fruits. Glancing around whilst she opened her saddlebag, Fluttershy could hear the distinct noises and cries of wildlife, some she knew, and some she didn’t. Nothing seemed to be close by, so she started picking off fruits and stowing them away with a soft rustle. It seemed odd that this particular spot was so devoid of animal life, since there was plenty of easily attainable food here,. bBut she pushed the thought from her mind. - Sshe was barely a minute or two from the path, hardly in the forest-proper at all. Most likely animals prefered to stay deeper into the woods where their respective sanctuaries were easier to get to.
There's some issues here One is that it's supposed to be preferred And another is the formatting and spelling issues. Possible fix: ...attainable food here. But she pushed the thought from her mind. She was barely a minute or two...
general kenobi!
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You are a bold one.
There's some issues here
One is that it's supposed to be preferred
And another is the formatting and spelling issues.
Possible fix: ...attainable food here. But she pushed the thought from her mind. She was barely a minute or two...
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Huh... yea looks like I was fixing something and completely botched it... not sure how I missed that! Cheers