Just one thing I noticed reading it again. Proportions are slightly incorrect. You said the puasy was almost as tall as Norman right? I mean if Norman is slightly taller than a Pussy he should be doll sized, so it is hardly impossible that twilight didn't notice him falling on the skirt. I bet you wanted to make him smaller but this detail you wrote implies he's at least 4 inches tall(10 cm), not so small to be unnoticed especially if twi is looking down
Pretty good so far. Can't wait to see who's next to get stimulated.
Good job so far, can't wait for more chapters, in particular hoping for rarity and sunny
Just one thing I noticed reading it again.
Proportions are slightly incorrect.
You said the puasy was almost as tall as Norman right?
I mean if Norman is slightly taller than a Pussy he should be doll sized, so it is hardly impossible that twilight didn't notice him falling on the skirt.
I bet you wanted to make him smaller but this detail you wrote implies he's at least 4 inches tall(10 cm), not so small to be unnoticed especially if twi is looking down
...Go on...
(Also, might want to edit it to fix his proportions. I mean, if he's so small he can HUG her clit, he's not "as tall as her pussy"...)