I think you are doing just fine. Plus, plans change as a story progresses. So long as everything works out and comes together in the end, you'll do fine. Keep up the good work

"Hurting your ideas?" If this chapter is messed up and broken then I'm excited for what you consider to be a great chapter!

Anyway, it looks like the Emperor is finally seeing what the ponies have been saying. Good on him for being grateful that they just saved his life.

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It wasn't so much that I thought it was a bad chapter as such, but I was stupidly tired, and the more I looked, the less it made sense.

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It happens to the best of us, I'm an artist so I understand what ya mean now.

I'm trying to make something new but I can't, my brain looks at everything I'm drawing so far and spits on it. Ugh. Bad feeling to have, it is a curse for creators like us.

Goes then comes, then goes... Then comes back with a vengence!

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Occasionally I do write something and think "this is pretty neat!" Those are the best days. Not that you guys can tell, but the best way to gauge whether I like the chapter I'm writing is by how fast I write it. I fly through what I think the good chapters are.