Chōriki Sentai Ohpony

by neozigma

Pass!! Elements of Harmony vs The 5 mysterious creatures (part2)

Disclaimer : Sorry for taking so damn long on this chapter, but things got complicated and i well...IRL stuff...
Now lets continue with the chapter!!

Pass!! Elements of Harmony vs The 5 mysterious creatures
Part 2

Rarity´s side:
Our fashionista trotted as fast as she could, being elegant as possible with each step. Of course she still was somewhat slow on her pace because of the various elements that could ruin her image, trying to avoid them as much as she could

“This place is so horrible and humid, I hope that wherever the princess sent us had a spa or something like that”

And she could have complained even more if it weren’t for a faint call of help that came further from her direction, thinking it might be one of her friend, Rarity disregarded her previous fear of being dirty and fully trotted forwards, fearing the worst.
All she found somepony covered in what looked like rags, trying its best to mutter something that sounded like help, but its poor condition it seemed to be made it almost impossible to even articulate the words, its bone-like arm covered in blood-stained bandages slowly crept from under its rags, moving its paw as if it tried to reach something .

Any other fashionista from Canterlot would have made a disgusted face and continued her way, but Rarity was not your everyday fashionista. The mare slowly closed the distance, still not knowing what to do

“He…Help me….”

“O-Oh my…”

The head of what looked like a lion slowly made its way outside the rags, many scars and injuries covered its face while its mane looked more like a pile of straws on top of its head. This time its words were clearer, still somewhat blurry, but enough for Rarity to understand.

“P-please…t-take me to the…pond…”

Rarity hesistated for a moment, the appearance of the feline made her shiver, yet its condition was deplorable; it was a miracle that the poor creature still breathed with so many injuries on its body. The fashionista cautiously trotted her way to the creature, her eyes showing disgust at the prospect of touching it.

“You need help and I know just the pony for it, don’t worry, you are in good hands”

Not wanting to leave the injured creature alone, Rarity looked that it was sitting in what looked like a piece of cardboard with a rope attached to it, sighing in relief that she could simply use magic to drag the creature with her, and so did she.

It took them several minutes to reach a pond surrounded by trees full of fruits, Rarity letting the rope be drawn by gravity. The feline creature did its best to reach the pond, taking a sip of the cold and fresh water.

“I thank you, unicorn, your actions shall not be forgotten”

“Don’t worry, dear. I just hope we find Fluttershy around here, she´ll surely treat your wounds if she doesn’t fait first…no offense”

The feline slowly turned its head towards Rarity, its words coming now even more clearer

“Why are you helping me? I mean…the rest of the ponies that come here often get scared because of my appearance…”

“Such cold-hearted ponies, I cant believe nobody would help somepony in need.” Using her telekinesis, the pony gave the creature some of the tree´s fruits “After Fluttershy examines you, i´ll make sure to give you a bath and I wanted to try my hoof in other specie’s fashion. Of course i´ll make something pretty for you, maybe something that goes well with that blue fur of yours?”

The creature just laughed at the comment, biting the juicy fruit , making such a delicious sound that made Rarity get some of the fruits for herself and the rest of her friends. With everything packed and ready, she started to trot her way until she realized that she had almost forgotten the poor feline.

“Im so sorry, I cant believe I just…”

But when she turned her face, all she could see was a path full of trees, no matter how much she searched for anything of the feline, there was nothing of the creature or even the pond.

“…Hello?…”

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Applejack´s side:
Our country girl trotted as fast as she could, unlike Rarity, she didn’t care if she got mud on her hooves or if she was covered on it, she wanted to get out of this maze and find her friends as fast as possible.

Of course things were going to get a little hard for our little pony.

“Hey!!!”

In front of Applejack, a filly was trotting all alone in this dark forest, unaware of the orange coated pony behind her until she heard the mare´s voice

“Oh wow, a stranger, what brings you to this forest, newcomer? “

The filly was yellow colored with a brown mane decorating her head, her cutie mark was a red phoenix surrounded by what seemed like flames. Applejack thought that the little filly was maybe like Fluttershy or something along those lines.

“Ah came here searching fer something with some of mah friends, but the forest went crazy and ah want to get outta here as fast as ah can” shoving her hoof on the filly´s head, messing up her mane, she continued “Name´s Applejack, by the way.”

“Crimson Phoenix here” Giggled the little filly, fixing her mane “Follow me then, I was actually returning to my home”

“You live in the forest?”

“Sort of…”

And for a moment they talked about many things while the filly guided one of the elements of harmony to the exit. Applejack highly interested in the filly´s invented stories, something about being a friend with a green minotaur, a lion, a giant head and a strange space monkey of sorts, at least she had a wild imagination…

Of course what would this fic be without timberwolves ? I mean, every other cool fic has them mixed somewhere so why not this?

“Timberwolves!!”

The orange pony shouted, looking that they had been somehow surrounded by a pack of timberwolves without them noticing. The pack slowly getting closer to the two ponies, Applejack quickly stand between them and the filly, ready to engange into battle.

“Y-you cant!! There so many of them!!”

“Don’t worry sugarcube, Ah´ll make ´em think twice before trying anything funny”

And in an instant, Applejack bucked one of the timberwolfs that thought a back attack would end the fight, yet it didn’t count on the cowgirl´s strong legs and perception, sending the beast flying towards a tree and making a CRACK sound when it impacted.

The other timbewolves started to circle both ponies, launching themselves from every angle and while some of them were easily launched by Applejack´s mighty legs, but others managed to get a clean cut on the mare´s body, slowly making the floor where she stood a sea of blood. The mare didn’t seem to mind, as long as none of them reached the filly that hid on her back, her safety was all that mattered to Applejack.
But not only were they many, but each attack made it difficult for the mare to even stand up, until her body decided to stop listening to her. Feeling the strength fading from her body, the only thing that Applejack was able to do was to hug Crimson, tears running from her eyes.

“A-Applejack…im scared”

“Shush there sugahcube, ah will do mah best to get us out of this crazy place”

The mare knew well that she was no longer in fighting conditions, her bloody covered body and her trembling legs were proof of that yet she had enough willpower to forget the pain and at least calm the filly, knowing full well what was going to happen.

The timberwolves didn’t flinch at the sight and just continued their way towards the two ponies, their mouths watering, almost tasting their soft and tender meat in their mouths…

“Screeeeech”

In a matter of seconds, a circle of fire stopped the timberwolves from advancing, not only the sight of fire being scared them away, but also the creature that produced them. Applejack´s last memory of that moment was a beautiful phoenix soaring the sky, the magnificent bird looking straight at the two ponies…

…

…

“uh? What intarnation!?”

The Mare suddenly woke up in the middle of the forest, standing up while one of her hooves reached the side of her head, feeling sort of dizzy yet the pain of her body alongside her injuries had disappeared. Instead of feeling even better about not being death, she started to feel worried about a certain filly that accompanied her

“…Crimson?”

The mare tried her best to search for the filly and, if possible, the phoenix, not knowing that a pair of eyes watched her closely…

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Pinkie Pie´s Side:

The happy-go-lucky pink pony jumped around as if her legs had springs incorporated, not minding that the forest was slowly turning more and more scary, the peaceful and cute animals slowly turning into hideous beast and the tree´s bark taking hideous shapes.

The only thing that stopped our pink friend was a strange pink statue that blocked her path.

“Uuuuuhh a statue, and its pink!! My most favorite color!!”

The pink pony stood in her hind legs while using the front ones to adopt a thinking position, an idea quickly coming to her adorable mind.

As if mocking reality, Pinkie Pie took a box out of thin air, opening it to reveal many accessories for your perfect party. Of course Pinkie Pie thought that the statue would look cuter with something more “happier” and so, she quickly adorned the statue´s body until it looked more of a clown than an ancient artifact

“Are you done yet?”

“Oh and you also talk? No Pinkie, statues cant talk, then how can this one talk ? maybe it uses magic to-“

“Can you let me talk?”

“Okay”

Pinkie didn’t even mind that a statue was talking to her, or even if it used one of its arms to clean its face from the paint and the confetti that she had painted him with.

“Why are you here, pink pony ?”

“Well my friend Twilight said that we should go there and I was like “Okay that sounds funny” and then I saw explosions on Ponyville and I was like “Oh no, everypony is in danger” and then we-“

“If its only for that then you shall not pass” deadpanned the statue

“Ohhh…”

Pinkie pie stood on her hind legs again, placing a hoof on her chin and the other on her elbow until another idea popped in her head

“Maybe the grumpy statue can let me pass if I give you something that´ll make it happy”

“…I don’t even want to know the thought process behind that…”

“Ohhh come on you big grumpy, there must be something that might cheer you up”

“Okay, you want to pass? Then all you have to do is show me that you are pure enough to pass, if by any chance you have darkness in your heart, then i´ll have to reject you”

“Okay”

The little mare accepted quite too easily the statue´s proposition, making the golem a little uncomfortable, of course it still had a job to do and the company of the pink mare was something the golem wanted to avoid. With pinkie´s agreement, its eyes shining and covering the mare in a white light…

“…Impressive…”

Images of the pony´s life started to flash, her life on the rock farm, the sonic rainboom and how some ponies and creatures alike thought of her as someone strange or even annoying. The golem was going to cut the images and just render her as an annoying life form until he saw a purple pony on her memories

And an orange cowgirl

And a white fashionista

And a yellow veterinary

And a cyan racer

The things they shared, the things they lived and even the reason why she keeps moving forward, those were the things that truly defined the being known as Pinkie Pie. The golem had fooled itself that she was but only an annoying creature, her heart was probably as pure as an animal, her only desires to be to make everyone happy…

…And live a happy life with her friends

“…Element of laughter!!!”

Suddenly, the light stopped. Pinkie Pie closed her eyes and shook her head, placing a hoof on her head, trying to make the pain on her head stop.

“ You are the first sentient creature without an ounce of evil in your heart, you can pass…”

The statue moved awkwardly to the side ( pretty much because of his short legs) letting the Element of Laughter to continue her journey

“Godspeed Pinkie Pie, and never let anything rob you of that innocence that brings smiles on the faces of everyone.”

“Okey-Dokie mister statue, and thank you. When I come back with my friends i´ll make sure to throw you a big party!!”

“I will be waiting for your party, Pinkie Pie”

And with that, the mare resumed her journey, hopping like some kind of rubber ball on the floor.

“…The 5 of us will be waiting for you…”

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Twilight Sparkle´s side:
Twilight Sparkle was the first mare to arrive, almost sure that her poor constitution would make her arrive last ( or at least before that Fluttershy) but that was the least of her concern when she saw what was in front of her

“…Sweet baby Celestia…”

A mountain with a giant door adorned with various symbols and pictures stood in front of her. A closer inspection revealed some equine figures and one strange bipedal one in the center of them, and an even bigger one in the background, it was possibly the size of a baby Ursa minor and what surprised her most was that the symbols engraved in it didn’t resemble any language she knew about. The mysteries engraved in that single door made Twilight forget for a moment about her mission, until a voice from behind made her return to reality….

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