Utility: The ethical system in which good and moral action is proportionate to the happiness of all affected. This is a story of that belief, science, magic, and a single man turned into so much more than human. How will Eques and Harmony react?
I hope discord and him can have an agreement of some kind to tolerate each other one day I bet they might surprise each other with a unique friendship maybe? with a lot of effort on harmony part perhaps... just i like discord alright even with his flaws
Its good that you enjoy Discord for his flaws, it makes him more believable . It makes him a good fleshy human thing, not a perfect rational thing that our main character wishes he was.
One thing is that the reader isn't suppose to sympathize with the main character's idea of pure rationality and his quest for it. The idea in itself is kinda out dated. You could appreciate it but in practice its just not a real thing, in my opinion.
And I think if Grey and Discord ever tolerated each other it would be in the name "Friendship" not "Harmony". In Grey's own words, "Harmony be Damned."
Note: I'll be holding off from the daily updates as I need to collect more thoughts on building this world of The Memoir. I know what I want but the words for it aren't there as I haven't done much research into raising a civilization. I could wing it but it would show in the chapter as the main character would proly end up doing something stupid or ignorant.
The Dark tag is for mature topics such as Sin, murder, and what can be done in the name of Justice and the preservation of a state. No explicit mentions of gore are present or will be mentioned without importance to a point the main charater is making. However, senseless and irrational violence will be discussed which is Dark. What can be done in the name of ethics is also touched upon. So that is what the Dark tag is for. I hope my answer helped.
Unfortunately I have lost interest in continuing The Memoir. I will publish the last chapter with only the illustrations I did but none of the writing as I did not finish it. The commission for the cover art was never finished. I did not lose any money however as I was going to pay for it after it was produced. From this experience I realize I biy off more than I can chew for this story. But it was fun and a learning experience. Thanks Xin.
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Chapter three may answer some of your questions if you would entertain the idea of reading it.
I hope discord and him can have an agreement of some kind to tolerate each other one day I bet they might surprise each other with a unique friendship maybe? with a lot of effort on harmony part perhaps... just i like discord alright even with his flaws
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Its good that you enjoy Discord for his flaws, it makes him more believable . It makes him a good fleshy human thing, not a perfect rational thing that our main character wishes he was.
One thing is that the reader isn't suppose to sympathize with the main character's idea of pure rationality and his quest for it. The idea in itself is kinda out dated. You could appreciate it but in practice its just not a real thing, in my opinion.
And I think if Grey and Discord ever tolerated each other it would be in the name "Friendship" not "Harmony". In Grey's own words, "Harmony be Damned."
Who made the sprite in your avatar?
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I did ages ago. Actually it was about 2 1/2 years ago if the file properties are correct. Haven't practiced pixel art since...
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I'll be holding off from the daily updates as I need to collect more thoughts on building this world of The Memoir. I know what I want but the words for it aren't there as I haven't done much research into raising a civilization. I could wing it but it would show in the chapter as the main character would proly end up doing something stupid or ignorant.
8129231 I hope you give us a status or two on how it goes with your research
Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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The Dark tag is for mature topics such as Sin, murder, and what can be done in the name of Justice and the preservation of a state. No explicit mentions of gore are present or will be mentioned without importance to a point the main charater is making. However, senseless and irrational violence will be discussed which is Dark. What can be done in the name of ethics is also touched upon. So that is what the Dark tag is for. I hope my answer helped.
Unfortunately I have lost interest in continuing The Memoir. I will publish the last chapter with only the illustrations I did but none of the writing as I did not finish it. The commission for the cover art was never finished. I did not lose any money however as I was going to pay for it after it was produced. From this experience I realize I biy off more than I can chew for this story. But it was fun and a learning experience. Thanks Xin.