The first time is difficult for most people, and Fluttershy is no exception. Luckily, her girlfriend Adagio is there to help. The methods may be unorthodox, but who cares when the result rocks your world?
I think it does! The way this scenario played out felt pretty natural to me, including Fluttershy using her newfound confidence to the point that she passes out. I'm sure Adagio will meet any future "revenge" from Fluttershy with anticipation and glee.
6975460 Thanks! I can’t help feeling really good about how this chapter turned out in the end. I am sure Adagio will just adore this new and improved Sweetie. And thanks again for the feedback. Now it’s just a short Epilogue left and then I'm off to other adventures!
...but before that, Rainbows bonus chapter. Don’t miss it, it will be a blaze! (I've decided to make Sunsets ' bonus chapter a separate story. You'll know why when you see it.)
6974915 Trust me, she will! I'm not sure when or if it will be written but she will Sing!
This chapter... Was amazing! It had all the good points for a good, pleasurable clop for anyone who reads it, and I need to say, you did a amazing job in Shy's dirty talk, it really suited her. Now I wonder what else can happen in the next, last chapter, the Epilogue... And the flashback part was something... Weird, I guess.
As always, typing errors, sorry, but I can't let one or another pass. I'm that annoying.
...Which she didn't .Fluttershy twisted and turned like she was on fire...
...We can't let your little cocchie be sad, no.
Well, I 'm sorry, sweetie, but you did say that
And I guess that's it, as always, doing awesome with this story! I hope the next chapter is as good as this one. -Igor
Oh I do hope if and when Fluttershy gets her chance to give it to Adagio that she...dare I say...Makes that siren SING
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I think it does! The way this scenario played out felt pretty natural to me, including Fluttershy using her newfound confidence to the point that she passes out. I'm sure Adagio will meet any future "revenge" from Fluttershy with anticipation and glee.
6975460 Thanks! I can’t help feeling really good about how this chapter turned out in the end. I am sure Adagio will just adore this new and improved Sweetie. And thanks again for the feedback. Now it’s just a short Epilogue left and then I'm off to other adventures!
...but before that, Rainbows bonus chapter. Don’t miss it, it will be a blaze! (I've decided to make Sunsets ' bonus chapter a separate story. You'll know why when you see it.)
6974915 Trust me, she will! I'm not sure when or if it will be written but she will Sing!
medicine
Also that should be my last correction, and kudos to writing a decent clopfic
This chapter... Was amazing! It had all the good points for a good, pleasurable clop for anyone who reads it, and I need to say, you did a amazing job in Shy's dirty talk, it really suited her. Now I wonder what else can happen in the next, last chapter, the Epilogue... And the flashback part was something... Weird, I guess.
As always, typing errors, sorry, but I can't let one or another pass. I'm that annoying.
And I guess that's it, as always, doing awesome with this story! I hope the next chapter is as good as this one.
-Igor