The first time is difficult for most people, and Fluttershy is no exception. Luckily, her girlfriend Adagio is there to help. The methods may be unorthodox, but who cares when the result rocks your world?
6949608When I planned it, Adagio wasn't supposed to appear at all, but then I relalized just like you did "how the hay could she stand up then? Besides, it was more fun this way. Glad you liked it!
OK, the first two chapters were just as arousing as the original fic this was inspired by, it was just as sexy and sweet at the same time and I was about to add to my tracking list... but this? you just won a fave
About irony, I guess you are right about the way I used it. (It's probably no surprice to you that English ain't my first language ) Although the way I've learned things, calm isn't...well, strong enough. The point is that Adagio keeps the irony in her voice in spite of Fluttershy getting nervous and I want to emphasise that.
Damn... I thought I got everything. Fixed, thanks!
Yeah, to actually use Coochie snorcher in sex talk for real...is probably a nono IRL and I wasn't sure if I would change it or not. In the end I decided that it would be to stupid if she began screaming foul words out of the blue. Hence Adagios line to sort of Justify it. She is also laughing, although on the inside.... I kept fuck, since it was a word she probably heard of and knew how to use, buuutif she had known that Adagio was really in the room at that point, she would never dared to say it.
Thanks for the feedback! Now, onwards to part three!
Adagio and Fluttershy are fucking incredibly adorable...I could legit see Adagio's freaky ass teasing poor little Fluttershy like that to the point of a relationship like this lmfao xD Can't wait to read more...Suggestion for your next fic...Sunset & Adagio or Adagio & Rarity(Oh the kinkiness) and of course because they are perfect together...Sunset & Twilight
I see stalkers! No! Bad RD! Bad Pinkie! Go away, let them have their fun! But seriously, this silly intermission really was silly, but it was very well planned, I liked it!
6947162 Creepy and sweet, combined in a way only Adagio can accomplish. And thank you for your kind words!
I don't care about where the term came from, "coochie snorcher" sounds fittingly silly and cute.
6949492 It sure does!
6949608 When I planned it, Adagio wasn't supposed to appear at all, but then I relalized just like you did "how the hay could she stand up then? Besides, it was more fun this way. Glad you liked it!
OK, the first two chapters were just as arousing as the original fic this was inspired by, it was just as sexy and sweet at the same time and I was about to add to my tracking list... but this? you just won a fave
6953890 Oh, thanks! He he... I didn’t expect anyone to like it so...you just made my day!
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Yay for feedback! Thanks!
About irony, I guess you are right about the way I used it. (It's probably no surprice to you that English ain't my first language ) Although the way I've learned things, calm isn't...well, strong enough. The point is that Adagio keeps the irony in her voice in spite of Fluttershy getting nervous and I want to emphasise that.
Damn... I thought I got everything. Fixed, thanks!
Yeah, to actually use Coochie snorcher in sex talk for real...is probably a nono IRL and I wasn't sure if I would change it or not. In the end I decided that it would be to stupid if she began screaming foul words out of the blue. Hence Adagios line to sort of Justify it. She is also laughing, although on the inside.... I kept fuck, since it was a word she probably heard of and knew how to use, buuutif she had known that Adagio was really in the room at that point, she would never dared to say it.
Thanks for the feedback! Now, onwards to part three!
6955089 I'm glad I made your day, I hope to read more of this story soon
6958032 My plan is sometime during next week.
Adagio and Fluttershy are fucking incredibly adorable...I could legit see Adagio's freaky ass teasing poor little Fluttershy like that to the point of a relationship like this lmfao xD Can't wait to read more...Suggestion for your next fic...Sunset & Adagio or Adagio & Rarity(Oh the kinkiness) and of course because they are perfect together...Sunset & Twilight
6958904 It's in the works. Glad you enjoy it
About your suggestions... Well, someting is coming...
*shakes head* To be honest, I think I would've wrotten something lIke this, too. Well-played.
I see stalkers! No! Bad RD! Bad Pinkie! Go away, let them have their fun! But seriously, this silly intermission really was silly, but it was very well planned, I liked it!
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Glad you enjoyed it! And no worries,they wont be interfering. They wouldn't dare...