Mac chuckled, but that only seemed to make Caramel blush harder. “

You just have that quotation mark hanging there... Not sure if there's more dialogue that you deleted, or if that was a typo.

“I think you’d look adorable, [i[freckle-butt.”

Italics tag is broke.

This was a fun chapter. Pretty hilarious seeing Caramel get so flustered!

5754949 Yeah I didn't bother letting my editor see this cause it was just a fun little interlude of something I've wanted to write for a while.

i love you so much!!.

5758540 <3