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now I am curious about the darker section....
5928454 I'm pretty much over-selling it, to be honest, and it wasn't long. It's just why that chapter's a bit shorter than it should be.
I can't help but think Entice was playing to lose.
Just tweak it, don't delete it.
Double post!! I actually still wonder if Entice is actually Luna. Especially with that " A constellation of stars exploded across Entice’s midnight body." part.
5931249 Maybe a little... Or at least she could have easily won the game if she wanted.
Don't forget that the key thing from Entice's perspective is that Twilight has a good time, so that Entice can feed. The way this turned out, Twilight gets the warm, happy, glow of out-witting the succubus, and so relaxes more in her presence. Entice still has lots of sex, and now Twilight is considering coming back on a regular basis over the course of a year, rather than just asking the scary Princess Celestia to dump her into Tartarus in two days' time. Making things a little more interesting in the bedroom is hardly a high price to pay.
From Luna's perspective, she has a good time when Twilight has a good time, and now she can enjoy the thought of Twilight even considering being a little naughty, and withholding information from Celestia, for her sake. Not directly covered by the story, but this Luna wants to encourage Twilight to be a little more assertive in the bedroom as well, so this is a nice first step.
So who outwitted whom, again?
5938034 Eh, not really worth tweaking. It was just a verbal description, from Entice's perspective, of a magic bondage sex thingy she would have done with Twilight had Twilight lost, and then offer to do the same with Moondancer. I like the concept, but I thought it would put people off.
5938040 (Almost) all shall be revealed!
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Well, just because she may have wanted Twi to win the contest doesn't mean she didn't win in the end.