Please don't hate me for this.

Because Luna is gonna go through some pretty terrifying stuff in this.

Good start here, very atmospheric. Can't wait for more

18983Don't Worry This Is Very Awesome,You Got Potential

PS:This Is How Luna Game 5 Should Be

It's nice to see some positive feedback.
to be honest i was half expecting 'U MAK LUNA CRY, 1 STAR'
It's gonna be a while before chapter 2 though, so just hang in there.
My author ensures me he will get this done before the holidays.

what is the name of the game your talking about

19295 It's straight up called Luna Game

you can find them on Equestria gaming, But I do not recommend playing them.

That atmosphere Defiantly tracking this!

At first I thought this was just a oneshot. You can't imagine how happy I am knowing that there will be more!

I especially enjoyed the way you slowly took the atmostphere from "vaguely unsettling" to "OH CELESTIA NO" instead of cracking open the full-on-terror in the first paragraph like a lot of horror stories tend to do. Gives that feeling of anticipation, and, after all, "nothing is scarier." The one suggestion I feel necessary to make, though, is that some of the more horrific images don't really get the description they deserve. Pillars made of pony body parts sure are scary, but we don't really get to hear enough about them to feel any way about them aside from "Yup, that's scary, all right!" Same with the "partygoers," though in that case my mind was twisted enough to come up with some pretty scary images. Still, though, it could be even more terrifying if you went into a bit more detail.

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Thanks for the criticism.

I think you'll enjoy chapter 2, when my author finally finishes it.

how come am never scared of shit like this