Applejack and Rainbow Dash were always meant to be together, they just needed to find that out themselves.
I can’t promise I’ll keep my hands to myself.
Then don't promise and do your worst, Dash
I think you need an editor, if you have one then one that's more attentive when reading. Your story comes off like you are writing it from the top of your head. Good luck on the rest.
4787913 I am writing it from the top of my head. I have a general outline that includes major plot points but everything else just happens as I type.
When will be the next chapter?
4835965 Friday
Then don't promise and do your worst, Dash
I think you need an editor, if you have one then one that's more attentive when reading. Your story comes off like you are writing it from the top of your head. Good luck on the rest.
4787913 I am writing it from the top of my head. I have a general outline that includes major plot points but everything else just happens as I type.
When will be the next chapter?
4835965 Friday