Twilight gasped and moaned as the electricity flowing through her, she moved her hands around Applejack’s neck and pulled her back into the kiss and feverishly began exploring once more.

hands ??? not hoofs ?

but everything else was great ! haha

So, there's no synopsis?

4025106 Haha, I can't believe I missed that. I read through it twice to deal with stuff like that! Thanks for pointed.

4025120 I'm not that good at them so I opted to leave it out instead of having a bad one and leaving a bad impression.

4025153
Fun fact: no synopsis is just as bad. It's actually worse, now that I think about it.

4025208 oh, ok then, I see what you mean. I'll have to make one later.

4025235
Right on.

Poor spike.... now he is scarred for life

This might be nice.