Quite Possibly the Worst Story Ever Written

by Rainbow Stache47

Chapter One

Clink.Big Macintosh woke up to the sound of plates hitting the Apple Family table. He galloped down the stairs into the kitchen, where the rest of his family sat. He’d overslept. “A little late?”, questioned Applejack with a grin on her face.

“Eeyup”, Big Mac replied blankly as he grabbed a piece of toast and ran out of the kitchen, almost knocking Granny Smith over as she got out of her chair.

“Watch out, you young whippersnapper!”, hollered the old, green horse. But Big Mac wasn’t paying any attention, he had to start harvesting.

When the red stallion reached the first the first tree, he heard a voice cry out. “Big Mac”, yelled the orange mare, “I need ya ta take some pie to Fluttershy’s!” Big Macintosh started walking over to Applejack. He really wanted to start bucking the apple trees, but he knew his sister needed him to deliver the pies while she took Apple Bloom to school. Applejack handed him a basket of apple pie and told Big mac where Fluttershy’s cottage was. “… And it’s right by the Everfree Forest. Ya can’t miss it.”, finished Applejack. Apple Bloom and Applejack went off in the direction of the school.

“Bye”, called out the big, red stallion.

“Bye!”, squealed out Apple Bloom, while running to give her brother a hug. The little filly hopped back to Applejack while Big Mac started off on the path Applejack told him to follow.

As Big Mac walked along, he thought about Fluttershy. Big Mac didn’t know a lot her. He only knew that was one of Applejack friends, and was a yellow pegasus that lived near the Everfree Forest. He’d only seen her a few times and thought see seemed nice, even though he never really talked to her. Big Mac picked up the pace, he didn’t want the pies to be too cold. Pretty soon, he came to a beautiful cottage. He came up to the wooden door. The stallion placed the basket down and knocked on the door.

Fluttershy heard a knock on the door. “Just a minute”, she called in her soft, sweet voice. The pegasus placed the blanket she was holding down. Fluttershy walked and opened the door. She was surprised. Instead of Applejack, a large red stallion was in her place.

The stallion spoke “Hi Miss Fluttershy, Applejack had me take this here pie to ya.” He smiled while he spoke.

“Oh, thank you”, replied Fluttershy,”It’s just I was expecting Applejack. She’s okay isn’t she?”

“Yes ma’am, she just had ta take little Apple Bloom ta school”, said Big Mac with his Southern accent. “Now where would ya like me to put the pie, Miss Fluttershy?”, he asked.

“Over here”, she said, leading the giant stallion to her kitchen table. Big Mac started to walk out the door when the shy pegasus asked him to tea.

“Aw, ya don’t have ta Miss Fluttershy. I’d hate ta be wastin’ your time”, he replied to her invitation.

“I insist, it’s a long walk to Sweet Apple Acres. Of course, you don’t have to if you don’t want to.”, Fluttershy said very timidly.

“Well, ya do have a point. Ok, I’ll stay since ya want me ta”, Big Mac replied very kindly. Fluttershy led Big Mac to her couch where he sat down. The pegasus went into her kitchen and started brewing Mac some tea.

Big Mac watched Fluttershy work in the kitchen. She’s a beautiful mare, he thought. Then Big Mac realized that Fluttershy was one of Applejack’s best friends. No, I can’t she’s one of Applejack’s friends, off limits.

“Almost finished”, called out the little mare.

Whew, Big Mac thought, I’m as parched as a desert. Fluttershy then started to walk over with a tray full of tea.
Fluttershy placed the tray on her coffee table and sat down awkwardly by the stallion. “How many sugars?”, asked Fluttershy.

“Three please”, replied Big Mac, “Thank ya ma’am”.

This is really awkward, thought the yellow pegasus. “How’s the farm?”, said Fluttershy trying to get some small talk started.

“Good”, Big Mac answered after swallowing his tea.

Fluttershy looked at him, she thought he was handsome. No, Fluttershy quickly reminded herself, he’s Applejacks brother. A big no-no. In the little bed across from them, a little white body stirred. “Oh, Angel Bunny, I didn’t know I woke you!”, Fluttershy gasped. Angel ignored her and started thumping his foot anioxs to be fed. “You don’t mind if I make Angel some food?”, Fluttershy asked Big Mac.

“No ma’am, ah don’t mind one bit”, replied Big Macintosh. Fluttershy left and walked into kitchen.

Big Macintosh placed his tea on the coffee table and walked over to the little rabbit. “Hey there”, Big Mac said to Angel Bunny while holding out his hoof to pet Angel. Angel smacked his hoof and hopped into the kitchen. You little rat, Big Mac thought. He walked back over to the couch and sat down. Fluttershy walked in and placed a bowl of salad by Angel’s bed. The bunny ran over to the salad and started eating.

Fluttershy walked back to her couch. “I’m sorry’ I hope I didn’t keep you waiting”, whispered Fluttershy.

“Ah don’t mind”, replied Big Mac. Fluttershy sat back down and started drinking her tea. Neither Fluttershy nor Big Macintosh could think of anything to say, so they finshed their tea in silence. After a few minutes, the stallion rose. “Is there a place ya need me to put this?”, asked Big Mac holding the cup.

“Oh no, I couldn’t bother you”, said Fluttershy, as she placed the cups in the sink. She watched Big Mac leave her house, although not before saying his good byes. Fluttershy watched Big Mac walk up the road leading away from her house and felt a little sad. She turned to Angel Bunny. “Oh Angel, I think I like him”.

Comments

[SpaceCommie]

Not great, but I've read worse.

[rainbowdashdimple]

It's not so bad. I like it