Given the extremely negative reception my story’s gotten, I’ve decided to scrap the old version and start again based upon the feedback I’ve been given.

I’ll maintain roughly the same plot: Cadance goes to a bestiality club and fucks an Orthros. But this time I’m gonna scale things back to make it less over the top and more detail oriented, cutting out some of the fluff for a better story over all.

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So, it’s been a day since ‘Princess Cadance and the Canine Club’ dropped and it’s getting downvoted to Hell; a far more negative reception than my other two bestiality stories got.

But I’m not so arrogant to assume that the fault lies with the readers, no I blame myself. I probably screwed up somewhere when writing it and deserve the negative reviews.

So I have to ask: what did I do wrong in this story and how do I improve going forward? Be brutally honest, I need the feedback.