Please feel free to ask any non-spoiler related questions about the story, anything else you'd be curious about, and I might answer them in the future in this particular format.

Updated the illustration of Chapter 42, not only because I felt that the original version's background seemed a little too bland, but because it didn't really fit in with the context depicted within the chapter, making it seem a little out of place.

Admittedly, this is due to the fact that looking back, this was one of the few chapters where I drew out the illustration BEFORE writing out the whole chapter itself. Side by side, what do you think?

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I kinda wanted to get an idea on how the audience is thinking the story will go, with the chapters already published so far. To put it into perspective, I already have every chapter and plot arcs planned out up until Pony Sunset is ready to go back to the Human World, after solving everything in Equestria. Past that is still undecided at the very moment.

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You might've noticed that Prologue and the Chapters from around 1-20 are overall pretty short, especially in comparison to most recent chapters. Due to this, do you personally think there's more I could add in those chapters, or do you feel that they still flow well with the rest of the story, despite their notably shorter length?

I'll be shortly releasing a new chapter soon, possibly tonight, but I'd like to take a quick moment and ask.

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Please feel free to ask any non-spoiler related questions about the story, anything else you'd be curious about, and I might answer them in the future in this particular format.

People might be curious as to how the creator became inspired to add certain things to this story, so every now and then, going to post a few of these to give some developer commentary. Let me know what you think, or have any questions you'd be curious on having me answer through these. (No heavy-spoiler related questions regarding chapters that have NOT been posted yet will be answered.)

So after getting a little feedback here and there, I've noticed that a few people have written comments regarding how they're not fond of the current direction the story's taking, nor are they fond of the supporting characters I've added. That's all fine and good, but I'm afraid such feedback is particularly vague and not really helpful at pointing at what else would need "improvement".

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Aside from reworking a few grammar/word choice revisions in chapter 48, a whole new depiction has been added. I hope that the new picture captures the mood pretty well, but bear in mind that this is most likely something I'll only do if I feel like the chapter deserves additional art. That particular chapter was remarkably long compared to other chapters, so why not?

Give it a look and please offer some feedback if that new picture enhances your view on the story!

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I feel something definitely needs to be addressed in regards to the last chapter. There's definitely quite the mixed result as far as feedback in regards to how Rainbow Dash was written, and how she was "flanderized". To avoid a further misunderstanding, please understand that she was INTENTIONALLY written out of character, because it'll serve a legitimate purpose in an upcoming chapter. Without spoiling anything, let me just say for the record, I KNOW what I'm doing, and the fact that you

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Have you been enjoying the story up until this point? If so, how about a little quiz to see how many of you have truly been paying attention? Here's 30 questions that primarily cover up until Chapter 50, so if you have a little free time, please take it and see how well you do.

https://take.quiz-maker.com/Q4A5MFV56

Once done, please be sure to comment how well you did, and which questions slipped you up. Until next time, hope you've been liking how the story's been!

I decided to go back and rework the description on the front page of Tale of Two Sunsets to something more professional and descriptive. Overall, what do you think, does this get you excited for the next chapters coming soon?

I've taken the critiques from most people who have contributed in giving feedback in how my Tale of Two Sunsets story was set up, and I've finally revised every single chapter with more unique titles, better word choices, and more respectable lengths, without really altering the story that much. Please give it a read if you get the chance, as I plan to add more chapters soon.