I apologize for the long delay for the most recent chapter. I was having real trouble with anxiety and depression, and it was hard for me to find motivation to keep working. I'm learning to make writing fun for me again, rather than feeling like work. I might have needed the rest anyway to gain more inspiration.

During their stay in Tartarus, I attempt to extrapolate the personality of each of the Knights of Order, trying to uncover what barriers might be in the way of them considering the love of friendship. King Danu comes across as the most angry, rebellious, and self-destructive. Indeed, his foolishness and hypocrisy feel like pre-reformed Chancellor Neighsay on crack.

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"Spike's Friendship Triangle" is currently listed as #15. I think I want to add at least two chapters between "Meeting the Students" and "Spike's Friendship Triangle". Therefore, the next two chapters I post will probably come before "Spike's Friendship Triangle", bumping it to #17.

If I got to adapt the Season 10 comics into a movie, I would want to make some revisions that would have made the comics much stronger. Here are my main ideas:

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For a "Season 11", I would love Hasbro to achieve these basic goals:

1. Give the Knights of Order a redemption arc -- finally uniting the Elements of Patriotism with the other sets of Elements.

(The Knights temporarily lose connection with their Elements -- because their murderous hate starts making them harsh and selfish toward their own subjects. The message is this: You don't love your own country if you don't care for the people who live in it.)

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When I listened to the feedback for Chapter #1, I realized that I wasn't handling Twilight's and Cadance's characters properly. I hope that my revision satisfies most fans' expectations.