Just a small part of the chapter I am working on:

Dreams and Nightmares

Mag looked herself in the mirror, her reflection looked taller l and with a narrower face. Her skin was also darker, with higher cheekbones and softer eyes.

She had never look so pretty so of course she knew she must be dreaming.

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The start of the next chapter of A New Sun Rewrite will be original and I don't just mean that quote at the start of the chapter. Basically Mag car was stolen because the Eldest is a bastard.