Cruising revisions · 11:34am Dec 20th, 2017
So I’ve been working on Cruising and most of the edits have been a few different words here or there or expanding on ideas that were poorly explained. So far only a couple of hundred words added. Biology and the two confessions were the most changed (Getting AJ’s accent back under control, giving a more logical flow of events in Biology, etc) but Shopping has some added material to it regarding the sudden blossoming of the mental link part of their bond.