Hello again, after conversing with a friend about the revision some things came up that could greatly expand on what I originally planed. I was going to expand and go into more detail about Twilight's upbringing with Sombra which I'm still doing, but it came up that maybe I should make a dual perspective and also cover how Shining's life was altered and make him a more prominent character. Maybe make him more than just a guard possibly some what of a pupil to Celestia like Twilight would have

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Hello everyone, I will be revising Twilight, Princess of Shadows as I feel it could be better. What do I mean by revising? The plot line will for the most part be the same but certain things or events will be altered and/or extended. Myself and some others who gave feedback felt the story was too short so I'm hoping to a least double the word count and expand upon some areas. The story as it is will stay up for now and when I'm done I'll take the chapters down and post the new ones regularly

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I'm almost at a loss for words. I never in my wildest dreams imagined that Twilight, Princess of Shadows would be this well received, 90 of which came within the first 3 days, and yet the Feature Box still eludes me. Thank you everyone who liked the story and here's hope I can continue to make more good works like this one and eventually get Featured.

Hello everyone, I finally have chapter 5 of Twilight, Princess of Shadows written and am in the process of revising, tweaking, and editing. I realize it's been awhile but I've been having some anxiety over this one scene not quiet sure how it would go over and kind of dragged my feet a little with this chapter. Assuming things go smoothly the chapter will be posted on Saturday July 8th around noon EST. Now this is the last chapter of this story but it is not the end, merely the prologue for

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Unfortunately progress on Princess of Shadows has slowed again. I know what I want to do but I'm having some trouble with the wording and I think I'm second guessing some of the things I want to do as well. So for fun I started messing around with some ideas and before I knew it I was writing a chapter for a new story which has just been submitted so it should be posted by tomorrow hopefully so check it out when you can. Also I will be retracting my Fallout story for the moment. I think I may

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Hello everyone, I'm finally able to sit down and write again, and it's not just because I was busy but it did play a factor. I had the next chapter all laid out in my head but when I started to write it I ran into a snag. There was a part that I realized wasn't going to work. I still wanted to use the scenario, I just had to come up with a alt way of doing it which took forever. But I think I came up with something that makes more sense. So I'm hoping to have the next chapter out in a couple of

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