Writing through the first real chapter (I wrote a recap) for the conclusion of the Greater Menace trilogy, it’s getting heavy quick. Suffice it to say, from the get-go, the Green Shard uses Twilight’s body to inflict some graphic violence. Maybe I shouldn’t’ve eaten before writing. I’m already deciding to give it an M-rating for gore (but no sex). And I know it’ll be more severe in time, worse than how Eleven ended.

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This would be for the conclusion of the trilogy. Rather than make somethin' I'd just have to shrink, I just went with the size it'd be on here. Modified a still from the show, from possibly the show's most popular scene:

I'm not exactly skilled enough to start one of these from scratch, so...thoughts?

With the epilogue of Eleven posted (will still edit if there's editing notes given to me, or errors noticed), I'm preparing to begin the trilogy's conclusion. General plot outline is ready, and the unbegun story is sitting there, waiting for a chapter to be added. Thus comes the dilemma: cover art. I have something in mind, but to commission somebody to do it well will cost more money than I have to spend on such things. So...time to fire up the handy-dandy paint.NET and hope the end

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This was a fun one to write. It's also markedly shorter than the last several chapters, at just over 4,800 words.

Heck, it's been fun enough to write I...haven't exactly been paying close attention at work the last few days, and kinda have a huge amount of chapter 6's rough draft punched up already. Good thing m' boss wasn't paying too close of attention, eh?

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Looks like m' editor had too much going on, and had to step down from it. Wishing him well just the same.

As such, I saw further reason to delay posting the fourth chapter. So it's up. I seem to have a knack for lengthy chapters...hope that's not a deterent for you guys. If so, have a quote from m' pre-reader: "Also, on a side note, this story is getting reaaaallly interesting. Nice one."

Thanks for reading.

I'd like to announce that the highly reputable and skilled LightningSword is now the editor for Eleven. I suggest you give his stuff a read and a follow (if you haven't already); he's very good, and his stories don't disappoint.

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When shaking off rust, and writing when the brief sporadic opportunities allow, sometimes one doesn't write as well as one should. Specifically, I have too many places of telling and not showing throughout Eleven so far, as pointed out by one of m' pre-readers. Gotta fix that. As such, there'll a few alterations done to the published chapters, but nothing that changes the plotline nor what happened in them.

Yay, busy life?