I'm just breezing through these... · 12:06am Aug 31st, 2015
Pun intended and not intended. But anyways, A Small Breeze updated once again. Be sure to read it, comment on it, and just show it some overall love, will ya?
Pun intended and not intended. But anyways, A Small Breeze updated once again. Be sure to read it, comment on it, and just show it some overall love, will ya?
Hello, everyone. I've published another chapter of A Small Breeze for your viewing pleasure. And quite honestly, I've got no idea how I'm capable of making all of these chapters out of the blue. Well, I guess that my PS4 charge breaking today was the last little boost that I needed. But honestly, I'm surprised that metal like that can even bend and break with ease...
Hello, everyone. Sorry for the delay on updating A Small Breeze, but you see I had to go to America, I had to go to Disney World, Universal, Busch Gardens, SeaWorld, BronyCon 2015... You get the picture.
Anyways, I'm here to say that a new chapter of A Small Breeze has been published, so you can all dig into it.
Oh, and Coda? Randompig12? EQD warned me about Repetition and Telly Language in writing A Small Breeze. If you see it, be sure to let me know about it, OK?
Hello, everyone. This is just something I want to get out there. I've re-edited all three chapters of A Small Breeze for your pleasure. I've cut out some of the repetition, made it more show instead of tell, and even added a few new lines in there for your pleasure. If you want to check them out, you're quite welcome to do so.
Hello, everyone. If you're wondering why I haven't been updating A Small Breeze, well, the answer's simple. I'm trying to have it published on Equestria Daily.
I fear that if I write another chapter before it's accepted onto the site, the Pre-Reader might take that new chapter into account at the last minute and find some flaws in it. So, for the moment, I'm trying to keep the fic on solid ground and wait until it's published.
Hello, everyone. Now, as you know, A Small Breeze is doing substantially well for the short two days it's been out, but there's still some errors that the boffins over at EQD can still find.
I namely say this because I got this response from one of their fic pre-readers: