http://www.fimfiction.net/story/243390/beach-day

Finally got it posted on the web for you all.

No I am not I've been working on this on for a while trying to figure out how it will play and how to screw Spike the most as possible without a dilldo.

Well it is currently under editing at the moment so hang in there and have a happy new year.

Lighting raised her brow, “Is that so, what kind of action do you mean.” She pressed herself closer to Spike. “You mean like porn.”

“Err... no I don’t watch anything of the sort.” Spike replied strain in his voice. ‘Please stay down, please stay down, please stay!’ He pleaded mentally, clenching his left hand tightly. “I’m not really into…” he then felt two hand grab his shoulders ripping him out of Lighting grip.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/814118
how here is ready to see this get real

OK so the editor says he is done. I just want someone to check it over for some grammar errors that may still be there. In best case the story will update today.

She threw the shirt to the back of the car, then proceed to her super-short denims. Don’t....be afraid, baby the radio sang. Spike eyes widen knowing what was about to take place and tried to open the door behind him, still unable to take his eyes off her. But apparently someone flipped the lock on the door, so Spike was stuck inside the car.

Not that it really bothered him. He just wasn’t sure if it had any propriety.

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Rainbow stood still in shock knowing very well who’s voice it belonged to. Silence took it’s place in the atmosphere as three individuals stood in broad daylight. Spike in his purple trunks with his belonging stuff in his bag over his shoulders. Lighting smirking in the sidelines, trying her hardest not to laugh at Rainbows’ misforchion. As for the rainbow hair colored girl, she stands petrified with her jaw open slightly with a slight curl on her lips twitching ever so slightly. It

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"Thanks," Lighting smilied. ""So how are you doing today?"

"Oh nothing much, " Rainbow replied trying to sound casual. "I'm just here at the beach with Spike, " she said dreamily at the mention of his name. The more she thought about him the more she faded away from reality. Soon enough Lighting noticed that her cheeks started to tint with a light blush.

Lighting grinned, "well sounds like someone is on date, " she teased.

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I'm working on the updates you all been waiting for in Beach day and you well all trip out when you all read it. The awesome meter will break by what you read. Spike doesn't stand a chance against Rainbow's taunting treatment.

As for Spike is screwed next chapter is with an editor, well I did it like a week ago and the original editor got busy so please be patient my friends. If she seems a bit soft then then this one would fixed that. And all of your comments are awesome my friends.