Finally got word back from Equestria Daily for Memories. There was something wrong with it, but they didn't tell me what it was at all. If it were my guess, it's probably a show vs. tell issue. I've sent the story to an official Proof-reader in hopes that they can help figure out what the issues may be. Hopefully he accepts it and helps.

I will try my best to keep the story as similar as possible, but it's likely there will be some rewritten parts.

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