The Beast Within, Chapter 9: Stirrings · 1:00am Jun 5th, 2017
Discord is ridiculously bored with proceedings. But what about Twilight? What happens when he learns of her little 'vacation to Griffonstone'?
Discord is ridiculously bored with proceedings. But what about Twilight? What happens when he learns of her little 'vacation to Griffonstone'?
The adventurers set out on the first leg of their journey. Will this be too much to handle from the very start? Or will they be able to get past their natures with a little guidance and honesty? And what of the seemingly love-stuck Princess Celestia? A conversation in a hall of windows leads to some interesting revelations for the two alicorn sisters.
I've been altering The Beast Within; Yes, a chapter is now gone! HOWEVER!
I am re-writing just a few parts. I needed to shape up my ideas, as suggested on my previous blog post. I've been re-writing, and I quite like where this is going now! I hope you all enjoy the edits!~
MWAH~ (That's a kiss~) Signed, Arreis of Avalon~
I'm considering redoing The Beast Within. I dunno, the story just feels like it's going nowhere at this point. I just can't wrap my head around my own writing. So, yeah. I won't delete/redo it yet without asking you all. So, what should I do?
Redo the fic, try to make it better
Or try and keep going?
Other ideas:
Delete altogether
Stop it where it is