Edited Chapter 16...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/180731/16/a-world-without-princesses/chapter-16-new-information
I added something to the end to shorten the following chapter up a bit.

New chapter is here!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/180731/17/a-world-without-princesses/chapter-17-cracked

As some might know by now, I'm rewriting World Without Princesses, but I'm left to wonder if I should retain the original chapters or not? What do you guys think? Any suggestions?

I'm trying to decide if I want to rewrite 'In a World without Princesses'...

You see, I had a few ideas that came to me after writing bits and pieces that I found myself rethinking. Adding that to the fact I've gotten complaints about it moving too fast, I got to wondering if it might be a good move? Most of the story would remain pretty much the same, just certain key elements would be considerably different - I can't get into much without spoiling the idea.

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