Story News. · 4:00am Sep 21st, 2017
After much procrastinating, The Original Princess Consort is now available on google docs, which can be accessed through this Link.
After much procrastinating, The Original Princess Consort is now available on google docs, which can be accessed through this Link.
October of last year, I mentioned that I was going to be taking down the story The Princess Consort to begin the Re-Write Process, and then never got around to it.....well tonight is the night. Starting tonight, and ending some time tomorrow, I will be moving all but chapter one of this story back on to my personal computer and removing it from this sight, and then I am going to start the re-write process, and the new version of chapter two should be up some time around Tuesday.
I have been going back over the story, and sadly, much like what happened with my story Her Royal Suitors, the story isn't entirely as I envisioned.
While the story is dark in a lot of ways, the original plan I had for chapter three was a lot darker then what it turned out to be, especially in regards to how Twilight becomes the Princess Consort. I also had more flashback's planned, as well as a bigger battle between The princesses and the elements of harmony.
Um...how would you guys feel about me re-writing this story...to...improve it as it were
Hey guys, just wanted to let all you readers of The Princess Consort know that the next story, Searching of the Soul, is right now going through the submission process, and will hopefully be up by the time I wake up tomorrow, till then, catch yah guys later.
Just so you guys know, I am beginning work on The Princess Consort once again, and hopefully regular updates of the story will begin to flow till its end. Till then, stay tuned for the update, and if you guys have any questions or comments, please feel free to drop them on by, I love hearing from you guys.
That's right The Princess Consort readers, I need your help with something important, something that I honestly cant figure out myself. As you know in the story there are now two ponies named Twilight Sparkle, which I know will undoubtedly cause confusion if latter on. Now I already knew one of them was going to need to change their name...I just don't know who...
Ok, I hope this will be the last time I have to do a rewrite for a chapter, and hopefully it will be the last time I ever write a chapter past the time I should be sleeping. I added a bit to the latest chapter of The Princess Consort, but only a tiny bit, still if you want to give it a re-read to catch the little piece I added, I hope immensely you will enjoy it, but once again as stated in the authors notes, I didn't feel this chapter needed anymore then I already put down.
Ok I really need to not write chapters while I am sleepy, it really makes for poor chapters. I will be rewriting part of chapter fourteen, I realize with how i have portrayed Luna this universe, having her just accept that her lover is essentially ready to die isn't quite fitting, so I will be adding a little more of a conflict before the ending. And no, I will not be adding a fight scene to the chapter, I don't feel that it is needed for this chapter, or will likely be needed for any part of
One of my readers pointed out to me that the recently updated chapter is showing up as already read, so I figured I would alert all of you to the fact that chapter fourteen has been redone, so I would recommend reading that chapter again before the next chapter is posted, otherwise the next chapter will be really confusing. Any ways, hope you guys enjoy...again.
Just to let you guys know I am going to be taking down the last chapter to do a few touch ups and add in a bit more to it before re-posting it, I was really tired last night when I finished it and to be honest, after looking it over i realize it needs a bit more, especially in regards to how the mane six react to Twilight's reveal. Anyways, thats it for news, hope to get back to you fast with the fixed up chapter, till then if you have any questions or comments, please feel free to drop them on