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May
30th
2019

"Innocent" Combat Report · 10:06am May 30th, 2019

These are the official numbers from each battle in Innocent. More battles will be added as they occur. Spoilers below: Be warned!


Battle of Greenspring Glade (Chapter 12):
Total Starting Troops:

  • Equestrian Forces: 372

    1. 370 Royal Guard: 50 Lances, 50 Mages, 150 Fliers, 120 Swords
    2. 2 Royals: Princess Celestia, “Captain” Shining Armor
  • Trolls: 9000

    1. 9000 Nadrud Warriors

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Jul
31st
2017

Inquiry · 4:39pm Jul 31st, 2017

I'd like a bit of feedback on some technical issues surrounding Innocent.

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Jul
29th
2016

On With The Show · 4:30pm Jul 29th, 2016

After the diversion that was PonySide, my other story, Innocent, will begin updating again. The first order of business will be the addition of prefacing micro-chapters for each Act, which will attempt to separate them more distinctly. Please let me know if they help or hinder the transitions, as this is a bit of an experiment. There have also been some moderate edits to the first three chapters and one edit to Chapter 18. It is by no means a rewrite, but some potentially

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Mar
21st
2015

This is why we rehearse... · 5:42am Mar 21st, 2015

As stated in the Author's notes of Chapter 7: Under Moon and Star, Part 1, I had been trying to fit everything in that I had planned. As it turns out, I did miss a rather important detail. I've updated the ending portion (just after they return to Ponyville) to include the missing part. It is recommended that readers go back and make sure they catch the change. It has a lot to do with things that will be happening later and rely on the added dialog. I have

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Dec
4th
2013

The Tags · 8:03pm Dec 4th, 2013

I've decided that I'm lowering the tag on Innocent from Mature to Teen. This is for three reasons. First, I believe I may have over estimated the content I'm posting and feel that a teen audience can handle it. Second, I have noticed that many other stories around this site have similar, and in some cases, worse displays of gore and violence than mine will. The third, I will admit, is a little selfish but it is a contributing factor nonetheless. The Mature tag might be depriving me of a

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